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Can we hold hands at the end of the world?
Can we feel together the waves of disruption,
The weeping of the earth as her acid tears sear our flesh,
And leave our bodies ruined,
but our souls beautifully untouched?

Can we fly on wings tattered and torn
By the pain in our troublesome past?

Are the clouds soaring overhead,
Swirling into oblivion...
As the eyes of the devil descend upon us,
Look through us in stark recognition?

Can I feel relief and safe
In the mere grasp of your hand again?

Can I see the end of everything in truth
morbidly prophetic, in a way...
yet we still bind ourselves together,
vines wrapped around a single vulnerable heart...
Beating weakly, but alive.

Though we stare down the gates of Hell,
Our souls remain pure, together.
Apart, devided, we would fall
Into the chasms of despair,
Never to return.

So answer me this...
Are we still holding hands,
At the end of the world?




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On Monday April 2nd, 2007, Bella Butchery (1143) writes:
fucking bloody amazing


On Friday October 6th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:
Why do I feel like I've read this before? Is this a repost? I remember leaving a comment, now I don't see it. :( dang it. Anyhow, it's awesome. Julia~


On Monday October 9th, 2006, BleedSilver (373) writes:
Nope, this is a brand new post, I rarely do reposts...


On Thursday October 5th, 2006, An Expired Member (25) writes:
aw this is beautiful. i loved it... especially the ending. very romantic.


On Wednesday October 4th, 2006, Ocean of Truth (22) writes:
Ah he's in an in-the-closet emo kid... sorry duffy just kidding :)


On Wednesday October 4th, 2006, Moratha (22) writes:
Wow, can something be so strongly romantic and depressing at the same time? You pulled it off beautifully. An AFI fan perhaps?


On Wednesday October 4th, 2006, BleedSilver (373) writes:
Nope...I am mostly a metalhead...but I see the likeness


On Wednesday October 4th, 2006, dying angel (1343) writes:
so many questions...and i loved how in the end you just wanted to make sure you would still be holding on to each other. lovely write.


On Wednesday October 4th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2406) writes:
such a concept...in the cataclysm what would count...true concentration of emotion...holding hands - not alone...beautifully wrenched and eloquently summarised


On Wednesday October 4th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2406) writes:
A real rollercoaster holdon tight...stay close to me feel...Romantic without the romanticised...strong write indeed, abyss-riddled and profound....now hold my hand..everyone!!


On Wednesday October 4th, 2006, mozarts cat (270) writes:
that's beautiful .


On Wednesday October 4th, 2006, Ocean of Truth (22) writes:
good to see youre back, nice and strong write to kick it off


On Wednesday October 4th, 2006, heartdripsblack (758) writes:
i like this too. well done.


On Wednesday October 4th, 2006, hate_doll (328) writes:
I like the end. It's tender but chaotic and the descriptions are quite wonderful. I like this.



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