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Derailed...
Such a lonely,
Tragic word.
Seamless in my eyes,
As a concrete chamber,
Dust encased

Sits gently below my feet
As my memory...
Erased.

Sifting through a last moment,
The stars in your eyes,
The love of the world,
A whispered "take care."

I realize
That nothing could remove this
From your eyes.
Nothing.

Entombed within the moment
Of seven guns firing three shots a piece...
A salute to a fallen brother.
A father.
A friend.

The list goes on.

A list, memories...
Life in soul.
Soul in life.

No bitter ironies,
No bitter words.

No tears could heal the pain,
Or erase the memories
We shall hold forever.

No bursting hearts,
Or late night starts...
To realize that you are already home.
And may you find peace in this,
In life, and in death.

Death is
a word
only used
by the living.

**In loving memory of Barry Crowder, A friend and father-in-law, soon to be a grandfather, and a loving, caring soul. We shall love you forever, and hold you close to our hearts, no matter the tears that will always come to our eyes when remembering you. Rest in peace, and may this piece do justice to your memory and life.



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On Sunday August 14th, 2005, Yesterday (27) writes:
Michael this is wonderful. I'm really sure my dad would've loved it. I sure know it brought tears to my eyes..


On Sunday August 14th, 2005, Rain In The Willows (855) writes:
This is beautiful, Mikey, it's Barry thew whole way, I didn't know him well, but he was nothing but good to me...He's where he belongs.


On Sunday August 14th, 2005, anth (1611) writes:
words that can be attached to a great life no longer lived is a monumental feat, an accomplished deep and moving tribute


On Sunday August 14th, 2005, anth (1611) writes:
to capture not what is lost but what lives on beyond our eyes, i found this write comforting to, in its finishing verse, i applaud your efforts


On Sunday August 14th, 2005, Serenity (600) writes:
Oh my dear, I'm sorry you lost him. This was truly a beautiful tribute, he'd be proud.


On Sunday August 14th, 2005, Jay Jii (336) writes:
Beautiful tribute. This is marvelous.


On Sunday August 14th, 2005, lollipoplips (110) writes:
entombed in the moment....which i'd thought of it first!lol. *lo lo*


On Sunday August 14th, 2005, Rain In The Willows (855) writes:
Did you NOT realize this is a tribute to someone lost? and your talking about 'I wish I thought that up first' or don't you know what respect is?


On Tuesday August 16th, 2005, BleedSilver (373) writes:
Down, girl. =P


On Sunday August 14th, 2005, An Expired Member (6) writes:
"Death is a word only used by the living." i envy this write.



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