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"An Ode To Dying Flowers" by BleedSilver

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I walked home in cloudy streets
Littered with rolling, dying flowers;
Wind blowing one last roll until
These masterpiece wheels of nature's silk
Were gliding across the gritty paved streets,

Each roll ripped off one more petal;
Yet the flower felt no pain.
Each grit of sand tore it apart,
Sadly,
It bled pollen and tears of clorophyl.

Chasing each other into painful oblivion,
These flowers, Earth-bound stars,
Shine a dull white light-
Remeniscent of school children
Playing tag during recess
Until everyone has skinned, scabbed knees,
Cracked and bleeding pure satisfaction.

And I,empty, alienated,
Walked past these bleeding, dying stars;
Across the deep pitted and scarred cement,
Over puddles and past the still flowers
To move on.

What I never got to see
With the passing of one more gust of wind,
Was that these wheels of dying beauty,
Now without pedals or tears,
Rolled themselves into the puddle,
To drown in the cloudy pools in the streets.



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On Monday December 24th, 2007, italianbella (297) writes:
stunning write


On Saturday September 3rd, 2005, An Expired Member (3) writes:
This is lined with webs of thought that could take you into many, many directions of contemplation and finalities. I feel like I've learned something from "Ode to Dying Flowers"...though I'm not sure what.


On Tuesday June 7th, 2005, Twilight (2102) writes:
there is some really stunning imagery in this...very surreal and interesting. im still impressed by your work mikey...keep it up *hugs*


On Wednesday May 11th, 2005, steuss (145) writes:
This is touching, the play of concrete and the natural setting, along with your images bring forth a vivid and captivating tale. Sadness at the end, but uplifting in its sincerity.


On Wednesday May 11th, 2005, DarkPoet (230) writes:
So goes the cycles of nature and man. Nicely done.



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