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10 single edged razor blades

One to start mending me
9 more everyone will comprehend me

Two to start to numb the pain inside
8 more maybe it will subside

Three to stop my burning eyes
7 more I'll realize

Four to feel a little bit of release
6 more maybe I'll have peace

Five to subdue the hate
5 more I might begin to really appreciate

Six to really understnad and know
4 more and my true self will show

Seven to leave an unbridled scar
3 more i can't give up I've gone this far

Eight to keep my mind at rest
2 more blades i must molest

Nine to really inflict death
1 more for a final breath

Ten to say my last goodbye
carved in blood, no more light

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On Thursday October 7th, 2004, Butterfly (122) writes:

Wow this is so unique. Very well written.

On Thursday July 15th, 2004, aXe FactoR (426) writes:

this piece is very original, i enjoyed reading this. -MeL-

On Sunday April 11th, 2004, An Expired Member (13) writes:

Wow...this is different. i havent seen a poem like this. After reading a lot of yor poems i thinnk youare a veryunique writer with a different style ~Ameythyst ~

On Tuesday January 20th, 2004, stormtalk (881) writes:

Cleverly done... good cutting poems are rare, and I can't say I like the idea of cutting, but this is definitely a good poem. Reminds me of a version of that Christmassy song with the doves... but more from a Nighmare Before Christmas perspective.

On Monday January 19th, 2004, DeathSentance (19) writes:

very original...very true...very sad

On Monday January 19th, 2004, An Expired Member (1) writes:

interesting........

On Thursday January 1st, 2004, An Expired Member (2) writes:

i love razor blades

On Thursday January 1st, 2004, An Expired Member (1) writes:

I like this, it is twisted, demented, and unique. Great poem, may you write many more.

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