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You are the temples
from which we dream would come
our stick figured shaped sons
and we await you
our entire lives
for your air
as it may pass
through the fabrics of our sky
to completely miss
our fragile lungs.

No matter who you are
we shall always miss you - and dream of you
even though we may never know who you really are
in the outlying meadows of our fortresses
you lay
in our glass stretched lawns
ever so far
as far away as it could ever be
and slightly beyond,
from there, we do see you -
and we are left -
wondering - thousands of miles away
will you leave us - before we ever meet you
smothered, and sunk.

You are

In the purist of all water
falling upon our necks
breaking every wall we have ever built
melting upon our 4 tongues
you are the chests
that drive us to collect
our broad expanding treasures.

You are

The declarations of war
in which we assemble
to honor ourselves in death
which is more then less
if not with you
almost something important.



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On Friday March 23rd, 2007, Jonas (877) writes:
well 'spoken'.


On Wednesday March 14th, 2007, Sin (1639) writes:
oh this was absolutely gorgeous!..you have such a beautiful mind..that first stanza stole my breath and i didnt recapture it till the very end *tips hat*


On Sunday June 4th, 2006, ApathysKiss (463) writes:
i will have this faved forever until the day i die and darkpoetry deletes my account for prolonged inactivity.


On Sunday June 4th, 2006, Lotophagi (449) writes:
I have read this work so many times, but have never had something to say that would do it justice or would describe what a powerful write this is for me. so just know that this is unique, amazing, and sublime in the essence of the word. Thank you.


On Sunday June 4th, 2006, Ainsof (1831) writes:
HA! no shiot! that is what life is.. replication reproduction explanation.. here!


On Sunday June 4th, 2006, Ainsof (1831) writes:
I know not of any better immortalization of the history of female for humanity, a very welcome breath of what has so often not been properly acknowledged... excellente!


On Monday March 13th, 2006, MindRape (872) writes:
wow Ash....hwo did I miss this? god i need to stop working so much and spend more time goofing off online lol this was ....a ray of hope :)


On Monday January 16th, 2006, The Fool (1001) writes:
I loved it was beautiful and eloquent


On Thursday November 17th, 2005, LovesInjecedVirus (10) writes:
expuisite.... amazing... beautiful...i loved it.. and ur cd is amazing by the way i cant stop listening to it!


On Thursday November 10th, 2005, manywalks (950) writes:
How did I miss this supremely exquisite and eloquent trip through far passages of your mind. Beautiful. ~ wen


On Tuesday October 25th, 2005, ApathysKiss (463) writes:
i can't help but read this again and still wish the same thing. oh well, at the most i can fave it.


On Wednesday November 9th, 2005, NikesRain (1421) writes:
it is exquisite isn't it? *sigh*


On Thursday October 13th, 2005, Full blame (33) writes:
"our stick figured shaped sons/ and we await you/ our entire lives/ for your air" ---- This, registered a Superb image.


On Thursday September 1st, 2005, abattoir (147) writes:
uuhhh...I think. there is no way out of this wonderland, I was just lost in your mind.wow.


On Saturday August 27th, 2005, NikesRain (1421) writes:
captivating and beautiful, it reads like water effortlessly flowing smooth and lithe into a pool to gentle sighs and swirl through mind and emotion like a kiss....stupendous


On Sunday August 21st, 2005, ApathysKiss (463) writes:
oh damn all boys should say it like this...


On Sunday August 21st, 2005, Sharon Rose (659) writes:
It's amazing, tripping through the strange corners of your mind and finding such familiar beauty within.


On Friday August 19th, 2005, Anth (1611) writes:
sublime, beautifully worded wonder, the flow and feel to this work, the descriptions and thoughts, well...everything really, so many elemants i cant quite articulate this is a great great work


On Friday August 19th, 2005, SamoneDrone (407) writes:
This piece is spoken so eloquently and the words you chose here flow like an image of beauty. i love the delicacy of the images you create. lovely piece. ....-samone


On Friday August 19th, 2005, glasshouse (801) writes:
"You are In the purist of all water falling upon our necks breaking every wall we have ever built " I love this. It sang. Your images are so elegant and so longing. Beautifully worded and perfectly presented. Nice job. -Glass


On Friday August 19th, 2005, elisa (2017) writes:
female.......the cause of cause and all will be effected.......but nothing will ever be lost......again....truly beautiful



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