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Punch a hole in the Daylight

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From afar I watch
attempting to see what I am,
from within I cannot.

When I was a child
I used to live
right there inside of myself
swimming through every notion that washed
into my mind.
Without the thought
I used to know what life was about
back then
but now, I do not.

I sit here in the street,
upon a curb that wrestles with the weight of leafs .

I watch
pulling the strings
as my body gets up
and again walks -

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On Monday April 14th, 2008, tangeled (538) writes:

i wish you still wrote. i think sometimes you might be the only person that understands my mind. growing up and becoming what we aren't yet still pulling up and going. go figure. yet another brilliant piece of work. ~ta~

On Friday February 2nd, 2007, Mylissa (1088) writes:

amazing.

On Saturday September 24th, 2005, blue (1751) writes:

Yes, we tug ourselves along as the days escape our truest of needs.. certainly understood, certainly enjoyed. doctaflash! ~b

On Sunday July 17th, 2005, Jay Jii (336) writes:

Great concept. Faved.

On Sunday July 17th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (473) writes:

Impressive images here... I can see you as a puppet being tugged along by fate

On Wednesday June 29th, 2005, aCiD aNgEL (35) writes:

This poem is so... (steps back).. intense and extraodinary... you are very talented. Just as everyone says you are :)

On Thursday March 10th, 2005, jaunty pill (74) writes:

This is bold and calm , But also , A complex drive into that which lives in us all. The need to exhale. Reflect on our pasts. Our lives. To bring an almost harsh and still loving moment to each of us. This is intense and well-done.

On Thursday March 10th, 2005, jaunty pill (74) writes:

That second stanza is intelligent and so filled with truth. It can be related to , But at the same time , Questioned over for what it means to someone else. This is effecting and causes an almost " scratched " insight to the cranium. A sort of push.

On Saturday January 1st, 2005, MyScarsStillBleed (26) writes:

This is so amazing

On Tuesday December 28th, 2004, AniDayz (1284) writes:

exceptional! well done

On Sunday December 26th, 2004, CharlottesWeb (592) writes:

this...w/o the cosmetics and just the frame.

On Sunday December 26th, 2004, CharlottesWeb (592) writes:

This strays from your wonted ribbon of literature, though does so in equality. Simply stated...I know, though I am able to reconnect mind, body, and familiar realization of self awareness at times. I think it was genius...sincere emotion, how you created

On Saturday December 25th, 2004, tears of decadence (222) writes:

yea... this is deep... way deep... especially the very first line... from afar i watch~ and then it goes... completely perfect.

On Monday December 20th, 2004, Chameleon (120) writes:

...from the ash rises yet another cloud of euphoria...I see I have been away far too long...to see all the greatness I have missed. Cheers, Ash.

On Saturday December 18th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:

running yourself-with strings of determination. yet still, you drag on the ground...there is still will in your limbs, just no strength to use it.

On Tuesday December 14th, 2004, frozen (748) writes:

amazing

On Tuesday December 14th, 2004, anth (1612) writes:

faves, because that second verse i find myself thinking of often, i really know what you mean, i think it shows in my writes,and as ever you bring clarity and style where i would stumble

On Tuesday December 14th, 2004, Full blame (33) writes:

I am impressed by the depth of your memory. myself..has always been standing up and forgetting

On Monday December 13th, 2004, Sin (1642) writes:

this was wonderful from the very first line...i especially liked the last stanza ~kristy

On Monday December 13th, 2004, sIo (892) writes:

very good imagery. makes me think of when i was a wee child. nice write.

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