DarkPoetry -|- DoctorAsh -|- Into the taco of machanical mispellings

Into the taco of machanical mispellings

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You deserve what deserves you ..
cry tonight again [please] find a way
fill the gaping earth back up with your vomiting liquids
of collapsing broken down oils, and hate
break your fingers, cut yourself, breath heavily
pant into the camera, carve yourself into the film
apply your roads of make up
travel down their streets
strip and pull gravity from the minds of others
eat it up and let them use it against you
will you please, simply: just .s e l f. .d e s t r u c t.

- type your precious literature - let them read -
- and feel nothing -
get it -a l l- out, before it gets -y o u- all out,
take it over - win - feel better about yourself.

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On Monday June 25th, 2007, An Expired Member (50) writes:

Damn you're good, man. I can't even find words to comment most of your work. I just sit here and read each one 20 minutes at a time. Damn thats good.

On Saturday September 24th, 2005, SamoneDrone (410) writes:

i just came back to read this again, and i still love it :) ....-samone

On Saturday September 3rd, 2005, blue (1784) writes:

Like footsteps in the wind, you've lifted me on high with this.. truth. Stop rocking so hard, you make me look bad. ~b

On Sunday August 7th, 2005, stormtalk (912) writes:

A beautiful chronicle of the orgasms of literary whores.

On Sunday December 26th, 2004, CharlottesWeb (586) writes:

This would take time, quite a bit of time...to pull and taste all it is...you seem to have compacted what could be 20 different poems into this one 15 line mind cruncher.

On Sunday December 26th, 2004, CharlottesWeb (586) writes:

Irony I suppose is that...you sum it all up...everything that poetry for most really is in just 2 lines...and though your finale is encouraging...I'm left with this very lonely feeling.

On Thursday December 9th, 2004, Twilight (2105) writes:

i feel a certain inner strength after reading this...makes me feel on top of the world. and you know what im gonna do up there? throw balloons full of strange liquids at you. yes...just you.

On Tuesday November 30th, 2004, Valentine (513) writes:

Peculiar, intriguing. A marvel of a write - "breah heavily pant into the camera/ carve yourself into the film" - beautifully poignant, i love the disturbing rawness - no frothy lace or illuminations. Eloquent yet unsettling. ~ Rose

On Sunday November 21st, 2004, Lotophagi (457) writes:

ahh, just brilliant, love the idea, and you've portrayed it magnificently and so eloquently. The punctuation and structure perfectly emphasises your point and allows for the entirety of the piece to sink into the brain and process each line. Thank you.

On Thursday November 18th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1862) writes:

You seem bright Daniel.

On Monday November 15th, 2004, CarpeDiemJane (42) writes:

i hope i'm never in your war path. nice pinch in the pants. great one.

On Sunday November 14th, 2004, Future of Despond (95) writes:

This is a very interesting piece. Well done, good doctor.

On Sunday November 7th, 2004, SamoneDrone (410) writes:

"You deserve what deserves you .. " truthfully distubing

On Saturday November 6th, 2004, Six-Out (1819) writes:

This is the type of writing that you read, and hope it's not about you. Brutal, but oh so eloquently displayed. Good job man.

On Saturday November 6th, 2004, wonderlandhysteria (2184) writes:

Ack, I hope this doesn't apply to me. *runs away*

On Saturday November 6th, 2004, mysticventures (547) writes:

poignant and concise! well done!!!

On Saturday November 6th, 2004, manywalks (953) writes:

Bruisingly excellent.

On Saturday November 6th, 2004, anth (1614) writes:

this was crushing,an explosive scene of emotions,illustrated with mechanical agression and precision

On Saturday November 6th, 2004, suicideseason (2152) writes:

Wow...humbling work...yours always is.

On Saturday November 6th, 2004, Solace (1419) writes:

*smiles* I like taco's...Your a machanical genus...After this I don't feel better at all, just angry...But I think thats how i'm supposed to feel...

On Saturday November 6th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1862) writes:

:O) realy good write.. Is this gone be up for some time? whatever *favors*

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