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Make me a Virgin Again

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The first thing I had noticed about her,
  were her beautifully decorated eyes,
  as she reached out towards me, with all of her mind.
  Lifting me slowly up towards her,
  with her emotions and surrealism's.
  Pressing her soft lips, barely to mine.

As close as we were,
  this was the closest Ive ever been to anyone before.
  I could feel every positive moment in my life, intertwine.
  Beneath her, the feelings I had for her rained,
  across my desolate gardens,
  replenishing everything in my life.

She slowly started to pull me in ... .
  as her breath hit softly against time.
  Her perfectly crafted hand, arranged itself,
  against the center of my chest,
  as she calmly leaned foreword and gave me a passionate kiss.
  Her soft lips, slowly pulled away,
  taking everything with them.
  We unlocked eyes as I lead myself
  gently down across the side of her neck.
  While I closed my eyes, I breathed in .. .
  Transforming, and becoming, our structure's combined ...

Unsaid feelings from heaven unburied themselves and entered.
  All at the same time from every different direction,
  in poured her whispering emotions.
  Waves speaking of eternities and dreams,
  knowledge's that defined the sanctuaries of love.
  I opened up my eyes realizing that I ... .. .
  had just touched god for the very first time.
  But only for that one moment in time,
  was when I knew everything about love,
  before an overpowering sensation of creation sucked me within,
  pulling me freely into the paths of the sky,
  where everything was invisible except for us,
  traveling through the calm winds that soothed in percussion's.
  To a place where spectrum's of space and time,
  have ceased in all moderation's,
  and became only one lasting moment, of forever feeling love.


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On Monday June 9th, 2008, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (169) writes:

Ok I take back that its the first thing of yours I've ever read..... Hehe, But Still wonderful and befitting of you. And still I am going on to read more... again.

On Monday June 9th, 2008, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (169) writes:

I do believe this is the most beautifully written poem about that one experience we can ever get back, that I have ever read. Being the first of your writes I have read, you have definatly hooked me into reading more. Congrats, and Good Luck to future writes, as I know they will be wonderful. -Heather-

On Monday June 9th, 2008, The Fool (1048) writes:

You left me breathless ~

On Tuesday September 4th, 2007, Circe Avalon (183) writes:

that was real. That comes from experience. You put it to words so perfectly.

On Tuesday August 14th, 2007, An Expired Member (4) writes:

this poet is amazeing on writing her poems i wish i was just as talented.......

On Tuesday April 24th, 2007, diavolessa (276) writes:

i always liked your poetry a lot. this piece is a good examples of what i missed. be well

On Wednesday April 18th, 2007, your_only_love (168) writes:

this is absolutely amazing and very well done... the images, the flow... beautiful

On Thursday March 29th, 2007, An Expired Member (1) writes:

wow

On Monday February 19th, 2007, An Expired Member (31) writes:

enchanting, seducing, beautiful.

On Tuesday November 7th, 2006, An Expired Member (3) writes:

This is perhaps one of the greatest love poems I have ever read. Actually no, it is definitely one of the greatest I've ever read. ~April

On Saturday August 5th, 2006, the dried flower (83) writes:

i loved this poem,,,,,,it made me think.

On Monday April 24th, 2006, XxSinkingDarknessxX (9) writes:

good write

On Thursday April 20th, 2006, mywristshurt (530) writes:

it feels like your floating away with all good feelings, doesn't it? great write, i really liked it

On Thursday April 20th, 2006, Shadow Rapture (229) writes:

a kind of rare excursion into ther realms of fantasy via bodily secretations? what an unusual but excellent piece - bravo!

On Friday October 6th, 2006, Magic Hatter (2382) writes:

I second this guy!!!!

On Saturday February 25th, 2006, An Expired Member (3) writes:

vary sexy and yet pretty at the same time. Love it. ~A Medicated Dreamer~

On Monday October 24th, 2005, A Burning God (61) writes:

wow, this makes me feel excellent, making the pains of everyday life float away......

On Saturday October 15th, 2005, the dried flower (83) writes:

i like i like

On Wednesday August 10th, 2005, An Expired Member (49) writes:

yeah, what they all said.................its amazing

On Monday August 8th, 2005, Aethelwyne (70) writes:

wow, completely amazing!

On Tuesday June 28th, 2005, Elise (270) writes:

This is amazing, I got caught lingering on different parts. Your description sexy, yet so romantically passionate..I dunno how to explain it, except beautiful.

On Tuesday June 28th, 2005, An Expired Member (19) writes:

that's hot...i mean brilliant. if i weren't so young and perverted i think i would appreciate the poem even more!- summer

On Thursday June 2nd, 2005, An Expired Member (8) writes:

wow!!!!!!!!!!

On Friday May 27th, 2005, An Expired Member (5) writes:

what a woderful write... i loved it.. if it were only this way for real...

On Saturday April 23rd, 2005, Three (10) writes:

Groovy my friend.

On Saturday April 2nd, 2005, eastpatient (63) writes:

You've written about something that's normally just meant for eroticism or even smut, and made it a piece of art. Yay. =D

On Wednesday March 30th, 2005, etarnally damnd (99) writes:

great write really inspirational any one who has a problem with this write can talk to me.~michael~

On Monday March 14th, 2005, An Expired Member (42) writes:

:) if only it was always that way

On Monday February 28th, 2005, LovelyAssassinx (209) writes:

This is absolutely beautiful...so full of emotion...I agree with everyone else by saying this is brilliant. ~Unlucky

On Saturday February 5th, 2005, Astra Dei (649) writes:

wow doc. your so brilliant. i love you. lol

On Thursday January 27th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (329) writes:

**wow** It was beautiful. Your words were so POWERFUL and STRONG. So So lovely dearest.

On Saturday January 22nd, 2005, Lotophagi (459) writes:

that's a helluva lot of romance..... beautiful in its description, the flow is immaculate.... and the title makes me wish I could change the past. Brilliant write. Thank you.

On Tuesday January 11th, 2005, ardneK (102) writes:

Wow, that is intense, hott and all of the above amazing. - >|

On Friday December 24th, 2004, Astra Dei (649) writes:

very sexy. very hott. incredibly descriptive. I am impressed as i always am when reading your works.

On Monday December 20th, 2004, JiNx (142) writes:

Wow.. that was incredible and beautifully writen.... you have me amazed -JiNx(ie)

On Monday November 22nd, 2004, Valentine (513) writes:

This is astounding, struggling and vividly imaginative . . a precious subtelty . . a sensitive write ~ Exquisite. ~ Rose

On Sunday November 14th, 2004, Savannah (290) writes:

this was absolutely breathtaking.. awesome use of words

On Tuesday January 4th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1259) writes:

I agree, it's breathtaking

On Monday March 14th, 2005, sIo (895) writes:

reading this again i see all the more what lies beneath that cold hard shell.

On Saturday November 6th, 2004, sIo (895) writes:

descriptive.

On Sunday October 31st, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (588) writes:

her beautifully decorated eyes... this is incredibly beautiful..

On Saturday October 9th, 2004, An Expired Member (55) writes:

im speechless... i love it!

On Friday September 17th, 2004, An Expired Member (4) writes:

I know how that feels there, as I've felt those feelings before. A+

On Thursday August 5th, 2004, DarkWolf (454) writes:

Delicate and intimate. Thank you for sharing this one. -Michael

On Saturday July 24th, 2004, stormtalk (915) writes:

It's about damn time people started realizing that love is the closest thing to an act of religion there is.

On Saturday July 24th, 2004, stormtalk (915) writes:

Oh, and nice work Ash ;)

On Monday July 12th, 2004, icyhott (46) writes:

im am in awe of your every word this is absolutly beautifully written *hott*

On Monday July 5th, 2004, An Expired Member (3) writes:

great job great job! -kc-

On Monday June 28th, 2004, An Expired Member (30) writes:

that was the best poem i have read in a very long time, you are by far a great poet. I hope to be someday be as good you...

On Tuesday June 8th, 2004, An Expired Member (15) writes:

i can't even tell you what a favor you've done for me. through your writing you've made me feel alive again, and that is quite a feat, believe me!

On Tuesday June 1st, 2004, aXe FactoR (432) writes:

wow,an awesome piece, which is sweet in a way. very nice. :)

On Sunday May 30th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (554) writes:

wow...this is the most beautiful thing i have ever read.i dont know how to describe what this poem did to me. . .~ss

On Thursday May 27th, 2004, An Expired Member (38) writes:

once in my life have i met a guy where things were like this, and yet i cant be w/ him! reading this makes me only think of him more and it hurts! love does hurt and this was an awesome write! good work!

On Saturday April 24th, 2004, Daegonna (39) writes:

Wow... ~Daegonna~

On Wednesday April 21st, 2004, AlluringDescent_darkbride (803) writes:

The complete embrace that you have in these words is surreal. I didn't think anything could ever convey such feeling, such emotion, but I guess I was wrong. You touch upon perfection with this.

On Wednesday April 21st, 2004, IceDragoness (257) writes:

I hope to feel this and help another to feel this some day.. ~Dawn

On Thursday April 1st, 2004, An Expired Member (7) writes:

i wish love was really that great truth is love sux bcz it always hurts so much in the end but it was an awesome poem

On Friday March 26th, 2004, darkangelXlll (175) writes:

wow...thats all i can say...wow you left me speechless this is AWESOME!i LOVE it it is just so undescribably beautiful and just GREAT i LOVE it...**bravo** ~darlin

On Monday March 8th, 2004, Reverend Machine (97) writes:

Wow...just wow, though i do have to ask if that moment is still as vivid as the day you experienced it or has it changed in any way. I ask because i have noted that all of my most fondest memories seem to slip into painful dreams.-DG

On Thursday March 4th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (615) writes:

Wow, nice job, I love it.

On Wednesday February 25th, 2004, An Expired Member (5) writes:

i know that so many people have commented on this. but i had to just say...that its so incredibly written and worded. i can almost envy whomever that was about. love<3

On Tuesday February 24th, 2004, Sky Singer (225) writes:

i've read this, and read this, and read it again.. and every time i am rendered speechless. ::standing ovation::

On Monday February 23rd, 2004, Daemonicus (657) writes:

bloody hell youre too good... im gonna kill myself. that why i dont read ur stuff.. now.. farewell.. im never coming back :P

On Thursday February 19th, 2004, Lydia Jade (796) writes:

well my comment is one of a million lol but this was a really good peice......very awsome...::LoKi::

On Friday January 16th, 2004, Endifference (275) writes:

That this could have been deeper and more simple, I rest loathing in excess. Nevertheless; good words.

On Monday December 29th, 2003, Drifter (378) writes:

Wow... that's amazing. Love this work, thx for sharing.

On Monday December 29th, 2003, TornPaperDoll (75) writes:

Damn, i wish losing my virginity was like that, you got damn lucky!

On Wednesday December 24th, 2003, _untouchable_ (72) writes:

i am confused between the title and the poem, i dont understand how they fit.

On Wednesday December 24th, 2003, Tracer (143) writes:

I took it as him wanting to experience the feeling in the poem again...^vTracerv^

On Wednesday December 24th, 2003, Tracer (143) writes:

such awe-inspiring emotion, I have nothing but applause and praise for you...^vTracerv^

On Saturday November 29th, 2003, Delphoid-Q (284) writes:

Perfect... Just perfect.

On Thursday September 4th, 2003, SeventhCircle (24) writes:

beautiful. a different style, it goes for description rather than rhythm

On Tuesday August 19th, 2003, Urban Shipwreck (1001) writes:

Creativity runs rampant in the Great Northwest so I'm not surprised. But I guess being from Washington makes me a little biased. Very good and descriptive write that made me wish I would find someone that would do that much for me. ~Urban Shipwreck~

On Monday August 18th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (532) writes:

a blindsided roundhouse to my ever gaping jaw..eloquence in honest..just perfect...

On Monday August 18th, 2003, eternal despair (72) writes:

that was such a good poem, well written!! .::cherie::.

On Friday August 15th, 2003, Moodswing (72) writes:

Unbelievable...I had forgotten the powerful emotions that simple words could create...You have got the touch...

On Friday August 15th, 2003, morgue_white (196) writes:

virginity through sex... how succulent

On Tuesday August 12th, 2003, Clementine (153) writes:

jaw dropping minagerie

On Wednesday July 30th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (803) writes:

Wow...that's the only word in my vocabulary that I can summon at the moment...If only someone would write something like that for me, I'd never leave...

On Monday July 28th, 2003, finaldestiny (99) writes:

i felt that one, very cool, my props!

On Thursday July 17th, 2003, dark angel (25) writes:

that was incredible, thats the type of emotion i was trying to capture in one of mine, you did a really amazing job with that, i can relate to the feelings, outstanding.

On Sunday July 13th, 2003, Demosthenes (226) writes:

i see it... its so pretty... i need to find me a man. gr. wonderful write though, really really good. -B

On Thursday July 3rd, 2003, An Expired Member (19) writes:

uh--oh, WHOA!!!WANT MORE!!!MMOORREE....back to temporary sanity...that is so really freakin good.

On Tuesday June 24th, 2003, celestine_moon (53) writes:

beautiful. simply beautiful. all has been said. -kitty

On Thursday June 12th, 2003, Twilight (2114) writes:

oh my god...this is probably the most beautiful thing i have ever read in my life. damn...this is good shit.

On Tuesday June 10th, 2003, An Expired Member (28) writes:

Your poem made my black heart feel light.

On Sunday June 8th, 2003, An Expired Member (3) writes:

I really loved it!!! I could really feel the passion of your writing...very good...

On Sunday June 8th, 2003, An Expired Member (3) writes:

brilliant and beautiful, very descriptive.

On Monday May 26th, 2003, blackdarkness (320) writes:

gteat write i like it

On Saturday May 24th, 2003, alone (200) writes:

so beautiful, just as you are!

On Saturday May 24th, 2003, An Expired Member (18) writes:

Wow..yes, an amazing write. It made me feel really good inside. thx ~evil_bitch~

On Saturday May 24th, 2003, manywalks (972) writes:

Amazing, simply sensual. I think I'll let it pulsate in my mind for a while. ~ mw

On Wednesday May 14th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (593) writes:

I can't beleive it took me so long to read this! I can't think of any thing to say that could convey my absolute adulation for this composition, of art. Wonderful thoughts...amazing how you put every one in the right place without missing a beat.

On Wednesday May 14th, 2003, hate_doll (331) writes:

so beautiful...she must be a lucky girl ;) everything I have to say is pretty much summed up by everything already said...awesome write...(!)

On Saturday May 10th, 2003, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (169) writes:

what a wonderful work, very descriptive and takes you right along with every word Great One

On Monday May 5th, 2003, An Expired Member (34) writes:

I could never think of a word to describe that poem- it's so powerful and sensual. I love it!! Bravo!!

On Friday May 2nd, 2003, An Expired Member (12) writes:

Beautifully written. Incredibly descritptive. Truly inspirational.

On Sunday April 27th, 2003, Stranger (291) writes:

Breathtaking. Excellent!!!

On Sunday April 27th, 2003, IceDragoness (257) writes:

So completely visual, inside and out, gorgeous (ack i spelled that wrong..) ~Dawn

On Monday April 14th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:

wow. that was utterly breathtaking. such an amazing poem. :)

On Saturday March 22nd, 2003, manywalks (972) writes:

What a delicious little piece.

On Tuesday March 11th, 2003, Jonas (885) writes:

i thought i'd read this before... but, this time was like the first time (hehe) a GREAT read.

On Friday March 7th, 2003, Dommi_of_Baphomet (112) writes:

wow.. i like the descriptiveness.. it made me think of how i wanted it to be <3Dommi

On Friday March 7th, 2003, An Expired Member (3) writes:

Amazing...completely and utterly amazing

On Saturday February 22nd, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

If an experiance like that can't make you a poet.. nothing will!!

On Sunday February 16th, 2003, cre (532) writes:

this is absolutely beautiful. ty for sharing, very good job.

On Monday February 10th, 2003, An Expired Member (1) writes:

One word....Wow...This is great work, it's beautiful....

On Monday February 3rd, 2003, An Expired Member (1) writes:

That gave me chills reading it...it was one of the most beautifully written works I have read...I'm glad I had the pleasure to read that...Very beautiful

On Wednesday January 29th, 2003, Litteratus (75) writes:

Beautiful and awesome :-0

On Monday January 27th, 2003, Jonas (885) writes:

great work... made me remember...

On Friday April 18th, 2003, Sky Singer (225) writes:

i, too, remember ...and think of all i've lost... it is imposible for me to come up with a word to decribe beauty of your poem...

On Friday January 24th, 2003, Wester (23) writes:

Very nice. Descriptive and sensual, nice work.

On Monday June 30th, 2003, An Expired Member (8) writes:

Wow... that is really good *tear* .. I must assume that you had someone in mind when you wrote that.. beautiful

On Wednesday March 31st, 2004, Instant Insanity (773) writes:

OMG! This is Going on my favorites!

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