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17 years later
a walk on a ledge
reaching into the dirt

 in the beginning
he touched the sky
and slid

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a man, lays on a cot .. covered in sheets
surrounded by beings ... mourning

deep down
inside, submerged beneath his muscle
echoing down the hallways
he pleas
for his life, to these beings
though the beings cannot hear him
he screams, into the translucent sky,
scratching at the walls
as his body lay motionless
"Save Me .. Please"
again and again
he asks
but the shortness of his breath
had long since pasted
and his mother cries
on the floor
weeping, completely disposed
and this was his
calamity

250 miles away
a young kid plays, in the front lawn
with his soldiers, laughing and battling
in total fascination
while in an apartment,
just a building away
a man's riffle falls
from the wall
and fires a single shot
that passed through a window,
and swept across the street
to exit out the back
of his head, completely dissenting.

Across an ocean .. to where a city slept through darkness
thousands of stone buildings, suddenly crumbled
collapsing upon the families, of people who were made of marble
the earthquake shook, and rattled
leaving tens of thousands dead.

i lay here
staring at the black slots
that create the distance
between the cars
that beat and dump
to the marbles of our race
time is but a button

again and again
i pass them
drifting
running my fingers through them
... brushing them, touching them, wondering
they're so irreversible aren't they
the tangents that they lay, with their eggs
cling to the memory, and mustn't be passed
to reach out and to touch something as smooth as a stone
is to feel as cold, as it was suppose to.






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On Saturday April 16th, 2005, sIo (891) writes:
certainly you must have taken some type of writing class for this...your ability to latch a readers mind on what you've written is otherworldly. within a few lines i feel entranced in your writing.


On Saturday April 16th, 2005, sIo (891) writes:
at first with this, it is so precise, so as to be direct with the beginning, and not to hazy and confusing, and then you jump into things, like water. i can feel the water rushing in my mouth with this.


On Saturday April 16th, 2005, sIo (891) writes:
then, you switch scenes suddenly and transfix our minds on a similar incident...finally you end it all with a slick yet steady pace onto a calm note that ends it...no matter the difference in context. AWESOME WORK


On Sunday May 2nd, 2004, Amandasauris rex (72) writes:
This was amazingly beatiful, yet as painful as watching someone you love so dearly being shot in the cheat as they lay there, slowly dying. ::applauds:: *Kitten*


On Friday April 30th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:
doc, another trip down into the minds depths. for me this picked apart my thoughts a threw them askew. highest of respect and compliments.


On Monday April 26th, 2004, pessum ire animus (73) writes:
::sitting ovation:: ...because im too damned lazy to get up.


On Monday April 26th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:
very nice....~ss


On Monday April 26th, 2004, knightmirror (425) writes:
damn i'm speechless.*standing ovation*-knight


On Friday April 23rd, 2004, Chameleon (120) writes:
...and the grandmasterash continues his legacy in fine as f@ck fashion...cheers!


On Friday April 23rd, 2004, AshtrayDirt (41) writes:
this is nice. ilike the theory of it all and im glad to see someone that thinks about the things occuring around them as opposed to just themselves. good piece. -Dirt


On Thursday April 22nd, 2004, urbanhumility (1351) writes:
a managery of poetic thought, well versed, and ladded with dreamlike memory.........well done mr. ash.........urban


On Thursday April 22nd, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:
Wow....love the scene switching..blended perfectly...wow..-Morb


On Wednesday April 21st, 2004, Bast (896) writes:
mm. a savory bit of poetry.


On Wednesday April 21st, 2004, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:
"time is but a button" That sticks out in my mind. So much truth written in a hard-impact kind of way.


On Tuesday April 20th, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:
Very thought provoking, you have a very unique style and imagination. I loved "deep down inside, submerged beneath his muscle" and the "i lay here staring at the black blots" stanza. Amazing work, to say the least. ~l


On Tuesday April 20th, 2004, OLd SouL (837) writes:
I don't know what to say.. pretty damn good stuff.


On Tuesday April 20th, 2004, nell (328) writes:
...thought provoking yet it leaves me semi speachless..ths left that feeling of a sad peace..like a low buzz of knowledge...excellent write as always ash


On Tuesday April 20th, 2004, Six-Out (1824) writes:
Jeebus dude....I want to have piglets with this, because it was that damn good. The detail that it involves is simply breathtaking....very nice.


On Tuesday April 20th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:
fuck.... ash... that is some serious mindblowage. each visage... so much depth to behold... a spiderweb of constellations.. your work is unique, you're a mind, alright. a pink gooey one.


On Tuesday April 20th, 2004, manywalks (950) writes:
Brings to mind the chaos theory, a butterfly flapping its wings; everyone blissfully unaware of that outside their realm. Oh, butterflies, that gives me an idea. ~ mw


On Tuesday April 20th, 2004, anth (1611) writes:
this is something recently in my mind but you give it clarity and beauty, total fascination i have with your poetry, breathtaking



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