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i found a hole in the air
so i put it into a cup
and filled it with shapes
like a sheep, i drank it
and wore it in my body, like my very own stare.

a single drop .. hung
from the tip of my accessory
as i gazed upon it
not quite remembering, where it came from
but i could have sworn
it was almost right there

4 legs wrapped in intimacy
absent of all fences
surrounded only in body.
my head - removed
as the apogee of collapsing weight
came .. crashing
sucking me through a hole
as raw as it is burning
as naked skin, is skinning,
and being touched, by jagged rust,
against the nerves
breaking
all sensitivity

i took my eyes ... and watched
as a 6 sided box
spread open, and unfolded
into many
consuming
pieces
of space
that vacuumed, all of what
was once empty

unemptied
i was, laughing
like candy





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On Thursday August 30th, 2007, SamoneDrone (410) writes:
I can't believe this is the first time I've read this. It feels almost a bit precoscious. It's refreshing. ....-Samone


On Wednesday April 20th, 2005, sIo (895) writes:
where in the hell does your mind wander to, that enables you...such magnificently unique work? this is as usual mind blowing, intriguing and massively wonderful.


On Tuesday January 4th, 2005, Gideon Lost (194) writes:
Oh my goodness! This is a beautiful piece. I am new to DP but if the rest of the stuff is as this is, I may have found a home. I love your wordage and imagery. Like painting with words and ideas.


On Thursday July 22nd, 2004, An Expired Member (6) writes:
Amazing play on words-well done.


On Wednesday May 12th, 2004, boughtwithblood (297) writes:
i was caught along until the very last line, which spun me... and i left thinking of the Unbeautiful Cambridge Ladies. was that intentional?


On Tuesday April 20th, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (629) writes:
Wow, that was so cool, I loved it. I couldn't stop reading...candy? ^_^ love it!


On Monday April 19th, 2004, nell (335) writes:
feels like sex on LSD....wicked imagery dood. trippy mind ride


On Monday April 19th, 2004, manywalks (972) writes:
Hey! Did you change the title, wasn't it Three before?


On Monday April 19th, 2004, knightmirror (426) writes:
amazing imagery and superb wordplay.this was simply a phenomenal show of artistry.*i found a hole in the air so i put it into a cup*fucking amazing.**** -knight


On Saturday April 17th, 2004, blackdarkness (320) writes:
walking into something new... :-) I like it ash.......


On Friday April 16th, 2004, gracefullytorn (73) writes:
Seems like you've gotten into the mind of Alice from Wonderland...never stop following the white rabbit.


On Friday April 16th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (615) writes:
I would have to agree with everyone and what they have said. This is like opening a music box and finding all sorts of oddly shaped things. Amazing.. -Morb


On Friday April 16th, 2004, purr_verse (1483) writes:
the opening couplet is brilliant! grabbed me immediately. i agree with anth; excellent write.


On Friday April 16th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (554) writes:
sexy and creepy..and all over the palce I like it~ss


On Friday April 16th, 2004, Lynaes (1148) writes:
Wow, very trippy, but a fantastically articulated piece of unique imagery. Such talent and imagination, amazing. ~L


On Friday April 16th, 2004, OLd SouL (848) writes:
Sweet and trippy like gumdrops stuck to the bottom of my shoe. :::OLd


On Friday April 16th, 2004, manywalks (972) writes:
Sneaky piece, unleashing memory, emotion, and meaning in a structured but oddly haphazard manner. Carefree and tense. ~ mw


On Friday April 16th, 2004, Solace (1420) writes:
For some reason this blew me away and left me reeling up until the last stanza...i giggled...laughing and candy...just had that effect on me...I very much enjoyed it, very much indeed...


On Friday April 16th, 2004, anth (1621) writes:
i had to read over this a few times to realy grasp it, and i love it, curiosity, imagination, dream like, a vivid and explorative poem , superb



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