DarkPoetry -|- DoctorAsh -|- so many of you

so many of you

.

.So many of you
are lead
and twine

so many of you
are fluid
pouring, out from the mind

behind the building's
i cry
as you speak
and i do try
to listen
but every word
just slips
into the empty
hands
of the people
that i hold
bouncing
from my eye's
turning
from shoulder's [burning]
from sweating
to sticking
to cry

____________
..... theres .....

so many of you
that

lie

.

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On Sunday February 18th, 2007, Mylissa (1130) writes:

speechless. seriously.

On Monday June 5th, 2006, CharlottesWeb (593) writes:

So I had to come back to this one...and I just wanted you to know.

On Friday January 20th, 2006, Rafe (13) writes:

i enjoyed the evolution in the thought progression. well done. thank you.

On Sunday April 17th, 2005, sIo (895) writes:

oh wow...this was sly in a sense, i love the transition between wreckage and chaos to exact decision. very enjoyable read, as always.

On Thursday September 30th, 2004, urbanhumility (1325) writes:

once again you have taken me to that empty sterile room and expained another of lifes seething dark lines...........very well done...........urban

On Friday April 9th, 2004, An Expired Member (33) writes:

a subject near and dear to me, so i can be picky... but you sank the hearthook sweet, let that line play out everjust .so. and then line(')s end ~rip~. love that.

On Tuesday September 2nd, 2003, maddin foxxxy (383) writes:

Your words just got me thinking about the lies that so many voices emit...a very thoughtful creative piece...your art amazes me.

On Thursday August 21st, 2003, _Andrew_ (302) writes:

this is really unique, i enjoyed it for itz creativeness (if thats a word ~_^) thx agen *~*aNDReW*~*

On Monday August 18th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (593) writes:

Enhales deeply....Mmmm.... How I do miss the laments of this particular mind. I found myself chewing over the sad truth of how many poems I have read and exclamed over...and how many of those I have retained any shred of purpose or memory from.

On Monday August 18th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (593) writes:

The end twisted that catastraphe of thought though...and my mind is now bounding over to life in matter. ~Golf Claps and grins for your genius~

On Monday August 11th, 2003, Twilight (2114) writes:

a straight forward honest message that i can relate to, very well done.

On Monday August 4th, 2003, alone (200) writes:

Doc that was by far brilliant...you have earned my respect much!

On Monday August 4th, 2003, An Expired Member (43) writes:

Brilliant is a great word for this. Kinda makes me think of (ironically enough) God. I like this one too. ^aura^

On Monday August 4th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (803) writes:

Love it, but does the cookie eat us or do we eat the cookie? ;P

On Sunday August 3rd, 2003, Six-Out (1831) writes:

Damn mister doctor slapper man. This was deep, the end left me like, woa. Nice write, I feel as if I have just been violated.

On Friday August 1st, 2003, An Expired Member (21) writes:

I dont see why you woulnt want people to write comments....you are soo deeply talented...its like you can see the darkness of your writings form out as u read.wow awesome

On Sunday August 3rd, 2003, Six-Out (1831) writes:

Have you ever thought that some people write for themselves and not otheres?

On Sunday August 3rd, 2003, Nadir (631) writes:

Again a good read. Thank you. About comments ... Well it may hurt to reflect yourself in others, and let others reflect in you. The alternative is to reflect only in yourself. (You can change "you" to "me" here, as this is my opinion)

On Friday August 1st, 2003, diavolessa (276) writes:

I love the way you distanced yourself from this piece! You put the world on a string but leave out what should be left out. {dia}

On Friday August 1st, 2003, pessum ire animus (73) writes:

what can i say... you certainly have a way with words. i love it

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