DarkPoetry -|- DoctorAsh -|- You are the Greatest Virus of All: [.L.i.f.e.] :

You are the Greatest Virus of All: [.L.i.f.e.] :

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70 million years from now
is when the equivalent .. of nothing .. happens
again, [today] .....

            As time gradually expands
            slowly reaching - towards everyone
            we learn to compress our lives, and rush without question
            into the pressure's ... of life's merciless hands
           never stopping to breath, breathless
           the never-ending characteristics, of man, defined

i fear
that everything will be fore-gotten, completely erased
from our memory banks ... in the end
that is why, i must feel
and i must enter, the minds .. of everyone, that is why i cry
i wish to be remembered ... forever, by everyone
man's ambition, rebuilt, refined

After we've long since gone .... millions of years from now
[today]
imploding stars will step over the earth, exploding
throwing the last few crumbs of our existence
... our history ..
into external banishment
into the dry sands of space .gone. as punishment .

        Self awareness ...will be forever lost
        with our once great culture
        that was defeated in it's once great struggle
        by it's greatest enemy of all [time]

  fiber globalizations
  and the explorations of 5th dimensional technologies
  physical energies and re constructive sheet metals
  dissolved

        The speed of time would have been considered once again
        to be the formal carrier
        in which the speed of light descends

  I sink beneath the surface
  into an alcove of binding torment
  where these thoughts stick
  to walls of my mind like pictures
  across a valley
  and onto the top
  of a 40 story building
  i lay, looking down
  upon the gods, that walk with gravity in their pockets.

        I believe, that most of us have fore-gotten,
       what's truly important, as we burn, everything down around us
       turning everything into fortune.

  All along ....... we've been mistaken
  we are nothing more
  than that person we imagined
  and i shall fall from here ... and land upon them
  to show them what they've feared,
  as our civilization rehabilitates
  in a hologram machine
  driving away the day
  to end, 70 million years from now
  [today]

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On Sunday December 9th, 2007, Ravenblade (275) writes:

Still one of the best written works I have ever read. Just needed to read it again.

On Saturday August 18th, 2007, Reefer_rave (232) writes:

Things like this are why I don't watch the science channel anymore.. In the end, time will beat us all. { and it doesn't care ) Overwhelmingly excellent

On Wednesday July 6th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (473) writes:

You have an intriguing mind DoctorAsh, both scientific and poetic. This poem was illuminating. I can't really say anything that hasn't been said, so, well written.

On Monday April 18th, 2005, Kinkypoptart (768) writes:

Wow, this poem had my attention the whole time I was reading it. You always are good at doing that. I love the flow, the rythm. All in all, awesome write ~*~Tart~*~

On Wednesday April 13th, 2005, sIo (893) writes:

you have attained such knowledge from whatever life you have led and i am more than privileged to expand mine by reading your poetry. this was magnificent in ways that i am incapable of expressing. quite memorable this piece is.

On Wednesday December 1st, 2004, SamoneDrone (409) writes:

reading this gives me the feeling of holding the weight of all the universe on my shoulders. i found this poem to be intense in every sence of the word.

On Monday November 22nd, 2004, Lotophagi (451) writes:

this bites me with intellectual prowess, really hit the spot.... and I can't say anything except a brilliant work in every aspect, and flawless..... Thank you.

On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, Ravenblade (275) writes:

Doc this is still the most epic piece of poetry I have ever read and can relate to on such a deep level, this is the first work of yours I ever read, and this was the work that made me have to sponsor you...>Raven<

On Monday June 21st, 2004, Crystal Passion (257) writes:

Oh wow Ash, why did I take so long to READ this? Your mind is so beautiful.

On Friday June 18th, 2004, aXe FactoR (429) writes:

wow...awesome write, every words holds deep meanings, truth...very thought-provoking...hasnt read something of such substance 4 a long time...awesome. -MeL-

On Friday March 12th, 2004, An Expired Member (6) writes:

tick-tock.tick-tock.tick-tock.tick-tock.

On Tuesday February 10th, 2004, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:

Damn...I felt like I was reading it for the first time all over again. (Which is odd...this being about the tenth time and all) And in your view...I agree...I share the same feeling. I want to be remembered...

On Tuesday February 10th, 2004, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:

But what's the point of being remembered by a society that won't be remembered by a world that doesn't care and will cease to exist as quickly as it begins. Ah...these thoughts are depressing...

On Thursday January 29th, 2004, gothemite (399) writes:

holy shiaatt... you're awsome

On Saturday January 17th, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (341) writes:

Amazing write...heartfelt and honest with actual facts...so truthful its haunting...-l-

On Wednesday January 14th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:

no words to do it justice... you rock

On Saturday December 20th, 2003, Drifter (364) writes:

Wow doc... if you read anything of mine you'll know why i love this... great job, i wish i could write as well as you do here.

On Wednesday December 17th, 2003, Mr King (623) writes:

brilliant f--kin' piece... your immortal quest here is now a favorite of mine...

On Thursday August 21st, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:

This is what I don't understand. I know I read this before, so why didn't I comment? Probably because I couldn't find the words to express the profound aspects of this piece. You truly are an excellent writer.

On Thursday August 14th, 2003, diavolessa (275) writes:

hmm, there are those who write and those who write right...I don't want to think of where the insipiration came from, yet, I got to tell you, the end is just a part of life, same thing with the start. True so many people have walked the earth and so few a

On Thursday August 14th, 2003, diavolessa (275) writes:

*are remembered, but you touched me today, like few poets have touched me, and you won't be forgoten. much love {dia}

On Monday August 11th, 2003, Twilight (2104) writes:

this is definitely a favorite. enough said...

On Wednesday July 9th, 2003, Chameleon (120) writes:

D&A IS KING! D&A IS THE F*CKING KING TONIGHT! One day I will awake--unconcious--7 billion light years away from the sickness of it all. I am so full of joy over this...(flowers on the stage)

On Thursday July 3rd, 2003, manywalks (952) writes:

And we strive to reach beyond our own undeniable obscurity, to leave an imprint in that nothingness that shall one day envelope us all. ~ mw

On Thursday July 3rd, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (529) writes:

You have slammed my minds eve this morning. Your words have spread across my brain like wildfire, You have such talent, such prose, your emotions are vivid and beckoning...I want More!!

On Wednesday July 2nd, 2003, slow.burn.star (94) writes:

god says quit your kavitching.

On Wednesday July 2nd, 2003, Six-Out (1822) writes:

Oh my doc....I seriously have no idea what to say. All I can say is that, you are someone, you do matter, a hell of a lot more than you know. Sure the universe is one big mass of nothing all mixed in, and it's easy to think that you are meaningless in it,

On Wednesday July 2nd, 2003, Six-Out (1822) writes:

and sure it may not all matter in the end, but keep in mind, and always remember, fuck the end, you matter now in more ways than you can imagine, and that's all that really matters.