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Kill Yourself

Stick the barrel of the gun into your mouth
a-n-d- -s-l-o-w-l-y- -p-u-l-l- -t-h-e- -t-r-i-g-g-e-r

::::KABOOOM::::

Theres nothing left to live for now ...
after all .... no one cared

when your gone
i wont care

no one care's
you didn't care

it's just unfair.

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On Sunday March 5th, 2006, monalisamarie (149) writes:

Oooooh, beautiful

On Sunday July 17th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (475) writes:

inventive use of the media we present in. It slowed me down, made me think more about each line. Very effective

On Tuesday January 4th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1259) writes:

very powerful. great job

On Thursday December 16th, 2004, Full blame (33) writes:

striking, sincere narrative. --- I am bloody humbled

On Thursday April 29th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1881) writes:

wow.. sweet sureal write going on.. maybe it's the drugs dude.. but this made me free fall.. :O) I like it.. bravo *dances*

On Sunday April 25th, 2004, An Expired Member (7) writes:

great job kid- so are you giving us permission 2 die? humm- anyways keep it up luv Alicia

On Thursday April 8th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (554) writes:

it made me laugh yay good job...in a way it was just funny because so many people write about suicide o nthis website and stuff i do it too! but suicide isn't the only "dark"thing to write about. good job ^-^ ~slave

On Tuesday April 6th, 2004, An Expired Member (24) writes:

very honest and powerful

On Saturday March 20th, 2004, darkangelXlll (175) writes:

there simple words that just give me shivers down my spin this is good and very bright i love the way you layed it out the spaces and everything i liked it a lot

On Monday March 8th, 2004, Twilight (2114) writes:

after giving this a good looking look again...i am adding it...

On Monday February 16th, 2004, flying_fox (801) writes:

interesting layout doc... i wonder who this message is for? The Flying Fox Person. :)

On Wednesday October 1st, 2003, An Expired Member (8) writes:

Short and to the point, this is great :D

On Wednesday August 6th, 2003, King_Crazy_Dave (420) writes:

hahahahah. yeeah. start some controversy and no matter what you write people wll comment the fuck out of it. this is hardly a poem. and supposing you were to call it a poem it is very generic and not worth praise. congrats. youre mediocre

On Wednesday August 6th, 2003, King_Crazy_Dave (420) writes:

by the way i caught the sarcasm. im just amused by the comments youre getting

On Wednesday August 6th, 2003, An Expired Member (12) writes:

Hellaciously Wonderful!! I love this write. :) You are a divine writer

On Friday June 13th, 2003, Rebel_Angel (402) writes:

wow...right to the point!

On Friday June 13th, 2003, The_Scavenger (32) writes:

nice write. short and gets the point acrossed. keep it up

On Wednesday May 28th, 2003, Johny_D_Lewis (629) writes:

mmmmmmmm chillin, frozen death, i like it, i really like it

On Wednesday May 28th, 2003, nell (335) writes:

lool like isn't fair, the world is built around sarcasm and it is what you make of it, greta job as always=)

On Wednesday May 28th, 2003, CrestFallenSky (35) writes:

yeah, i said that to a few people, they just got pissed at me, good work, as always ~CFS

On Monday May 26th, 2003, Inevitability (645) writes:

My four year old says that: it's not fair. I tell him: no, it's not. Am I reading as much sarcasm here as you intended, or is it just me.....

On Saturday May 24th, 2003, manywalks (972) writes:

I liked the way this coiled around me and rather seemed to wait. Wonderful work Sweetcheeks. ~ mw

On Friday May 23rd, 2003, An Expired Member (52) writes:

this is one of my all time faves of urs!

On Thursday May 22nd, 2003, alone (200) writes:

Ahhhh, thought provolking, maybe I shall take your advice eh?

On Thursday May 22nd, 2003, An Expired Member (52) writes:

short but awesome.... ur poetry is always SO good

On Thursday May 22nd, 2003, GothicBlack (278) writes:

Doc, you have such brilliance when it comes to short poem. The ability to make chills run up and down eveyones whole body * or at least mine, a few times* bravo. ~gothic~

On Thursday May 22nd, 2003, SnowQueen (64) writes:

Shocking, gave me chills. Great work. All so true

On Thursday May 22nd, 2003, Twilight (2114) writes:

this is reeeeally good. i read it over and over until the words all came together into one little video playing in my head showed a desperate soul with a gun in their mouth praying that the chamber is empty...but pulling the trigger anyway. good write.

On Thursday May 22nd, 2003, Six-Out (1831) writes:

Doc, you just have a way with writing short stuff that's good. Fuck you! I want to do that. Ah well, goow rite. Later.

On Thursday May 22nd, 2003, Nightmare_Evil (17) writes:

This reminds me of what some people have told me to do... many times, but in fewer words. It's great.

On Thursday May 22nd, 2003, Saint_Reaper (288) writes:

indeed....well written, the words in the poem were short, yet still packed a big PUNCH!!!!

On Thursday May 22nd, 2003, Zahgurim (34) writes:

filled with so much strong, negative feelings...GREAT piece

On Thursday May 22nd, 2003, CharlottesWeb (593) writes:

Deep breath... Loud... crunchy truth sounding like nails on chalk board... I swear I'm rubbing my ears. 41 words and you've created an audible scare...with pleasure. ~DW~

On Thursday May 22nd, 2003, cre (532) writes:

jesus ... ouch. that's chilling, DrA.

On Thursday March 11th, 2004, An Expired Member (7) writes:

*shivers* crikey, thats great!

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