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    Her pale white face
    is in ambiance
    blurred over by two black blots
    of over-sized eyes and foam.

    She travels through her apartment
    with her ears
    torn and borrowed from mistreatment
    she sulks
    as she twiddles her thumbs
    sitting alone with her binder of poems.
    
    The bodies of her two empty shoes
    are filled with a ghostly presence
    on the floor of her darkest room
    next to a mountain of cloths
    covering her phone.

    She blinks her eyes once again
    as she stares off into an empty page
    occupying only her thoughts
    with the few smudges
    of her eraser crumbs.
    
    And it’s unfortunate to know
    that here I’m sitting also
    dreaming of someone just like her
    to one day come along.








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On Thursday May 15th, 2008, Endifference (275) writes:
pure gold -END


On Thursday April 17th, 2008, Rebell tiGer King (647) writes:
fascinating, silky smooth, a gravity that cannot be denied, excellent brother -symph-


On Thursday March 27th, 2008, NikesRain (1511) writes:
always beautiful... your pieces like this... you've a lovely mind Daniel.. *hugs* ~nikes


On Friday March 7th, 2008, Bella Butchery (1170) writes:
this was amazing... i hope you find what you are looking for.


On Friday February 22nd, 2008, TropicalSnowstorm (687) writes:
Wow...fantastic! I love the ending, which is the perfect way to cap off all the wonderful imagery in this piece. "The bodies of her two empty shoes are filled with a ghostly presence" - brilliance... Ciao, T/S


On Wednesday February 20th, 2008, ColdScaredAlone (121) writes:
I signed on feeling like this girl, looking for comforting words... very nicely put,I must say.


On Friday January 11th, 2008, slow.burn.star (95) writes:
Hey you. Long time no write.


On Monday December 24th, 2007, RubyXero (487) writes:
wow that was an unexpected ending. sweet tho. i really liked it.


On Saturday December 22nd, 2007, Inevitability (630) writes:
that...was a repost. :) I remember your words like glue in carpet...or something snappy like that...


On Friday December 28th, 2007, Liz (408) writes:
if sharon's right, you owe us something newer. pronto.


On Wednesday December 19th, 2007, blue (1784) writes:
Doc rocks. yup. ~b


On Wednesday December 19th, 2007, An Expired Member (50) writes:
master piece! i really liked it and this girl reminds me of me too.... well keep it up! you're awesome


On Wednesday December 19th, 2007, wonderlandhysteria (2184) writes:
Truly moving.


On Wednesday December 19th, 2007, j-rod (9) writes:
Wow. That was incredibly smooth.. You've got yourself a fan on this one..


On Wednesday December 19th, 2007, elisa (1980) writes:
effortless beauty... so fluent ..feels like silk on the tongue. beautiful indeed.


On Wednesday December 19th, 2007, capt_funguy (1003) writes:
this was simply exquisite... i wait for pieces like this to happen ... beautiful... funguy



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