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A metal box speeds by as it makes its way
down a never ending slab of sweaty concrete.
Squeezing in and out of an endless stream of cars,
passing between vast landscapes
of billion dollar squares, and ceramic tanning plates.
Into the rear view the buildings slip, as does the past,
as the metal box travels, mile after mile after mile after mile
until it finally arrives at its destination,
where it pulls into a cave
made out of shredded glass, and steam dried dates.

The metal box is once again safe
as it is secured away into its parking place.
A pink jello-y man descends from a sliding door on the side
as the metal box beneath him, deflates.
The pink jello-y man wanders inside
making his way through the labyrinth like contours
of his rather large home, to at last sit upon
his auto-warming couch, alone.
He then commences once again,
in watching his home security tapes.

Just beyond the tall walls that surround him, out front
just beyond the lawn, are barricades after barricades
of towering steel fences, separating him from his neighbors
and his neighbors from their neighbors.
Branching out like grids on a piece of paper, on and on
until the eye becomes invalid,
when theres nothing left to see
except, complete security.

There he sits, inside of his house,
staring at a large flashing cube on the wall
that displays anything you can imagine.
Though he doesn't really realize it, he does hope,
and he imagines, watching himself,
from a third prospective.
Like he does every night,
just for awhile, he becomes everything
he has ever imagined.
He becomes - something new,
every time he turns the station,
his life changes, he falls in love, is strong, and handsome.
He knows everyone, he can beat anything, he can save anyone
he's funny, smart and attractive.
The cube, then becomes of him.
He slightly thinks, the cube shuts off
he falls asleep
the couch is warm, and the moon above him, sinks.

"There used to be a time
The further we look past each other
the easier it is for us to slip
from reality
where we end up in a line crawling along the roads
heading towards the suburbs
heading towards our coffin shaped homes
filled with people like you and me
who breath - in an unimaginable dream."





.Comfortably Titled by: Joanna :Sio:



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On Wednesday June 25th, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (417) writes:
I love escaping to this world in your poem from time to time, had I more favorites this would be on the list. Write on.


On Tuesday June 24th, 2008, urbanhumility (1351) writes:
brilliant in introspective intellect......a portrayal of a present moments and what is on the other side........sterile and clean as only you can.........so very well spoken my friend..............urban


On Tuesday January 1st, 2008, CharlottesWeb (593) writes:
As you understand, I'm a long time fan. My poetry interests have waned with the tides of my emotions, and most poetry fails to reach me anymore. I'll read lines, stanzas forgetting words the moment their part is done, and not minding enough to go back over them. Your poetry, creativity...never fails to fullfill my craving for "poetry". This poem, particular...is much like "when my mom cries" (I think that was the name of it?) I might forget the title, but I'll never forget the emotions it has invoked. A mini-epic in it's own right. I was hooked from the second line. By stanza two I was excited by the novelty of the poem, the sheer fact I had NO IDEA...where it was going, but knowing it was going somewhere...always somewhere with you as it's creator. I wanted to speed through stanza four, but could not force myself to hurry through something I was enjoying so much. I knew by then, the story...a old story, told in such a completely new attention grasping way. I've reread several times. This is inspiring Ash!!! And I haven't been inspired for a while. Thank you for such an amazing pinhole view into your creativity...and thank you for helping me find a bit of my own.


On Friday December 14th, 2007, An Expired Member (17) writes:
Such a great commentary on "pop culture" lives. I agree wholeheartedly and love it.


On Friday December 14th, 2007, NikesRain (1475) writes:
i've read this countless times and still all i can come up with is... perfect and amazing


On Sunday September 16th, 2007, SamoneDrone (408) writes:
How coldly we try to bar ourselves from everyone else. We're gravitating toward a world of fear, paranoia, and distrust. You had a very important message here and you made your point well. ....-Samone


On Saturday September 15th, 2007, elisa (2021) writes:
wow.... the perfect happenstance .........a multidimensional collision......... pixelated beauty, aching for a trainwreck smile..... prophetic words of inevitability...this is a keeper.


On Friday September 14th, 2007, Alanarchy (1600) writes:
Had my eyes twinkleing from the first section. I love poetry. Stuff like this is why.


On Friday September 14th, 2007, stuart_pid (217) writes:
its a sad state of existence that we've all become so comfortably content with. myself as much as anyone, sitting here in front of my computer or my television, trading social and emotional connection for mind numbing entertainment and a false sense of se


On Friday September 14th, 2007, stuart_pid (217) writes:
security. the descriptions were perfect, everything within boxes within boxes within boxes. i love it. and that title is too cool.


On Friday September 14th, 2007, glasshouse (801) writes:
wow. this was very relevant. very well written. your descriptions are exact and vivid. the title is rockin, go jo. You've still got it, Docta. --Jes


On Thursday September 13th, 2007, sIo (891) writes:
as i said before....my imagination has found heaven in your words and a new paradise with each each write....i fucking love you, ashman...you're amazing



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