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"A Kite Can Fucking get it Right, Why Can't We?" by SamoneDrone

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The Kite detached itself from the string
Said it needed to be free
Said it felt bad for humans
And their need to get caught up in petty things.

Said it was proud it didn't belong to any sex or race
Proud to be ageless and undefined
Classless on the hierarchy
Made it the only one of its kind.

It flew on to different lands
It flew over the sea
Found out humans are the same everywhere
Even if they refuse to be.

Since it was closer to the heavens
Than any human being
It could testify that we are all worshipping the same god
And that we are all praying for the same things.

It saw that pain is pain wherever you go
From America to Russia, Sudan, and the Bay of Bengal
If your child dies, it hurts
Whether you're living in poverty, or you have it all.

It made up its mind about "helping out"
That it should not involve killing on another country's soil
It should be genuine, true, and honest
And should have nothing to do with being motivated by oil.

The kite thought about the word "unity"
Wondering, "What does it mean to me?"
"It apparently doesn't mean anything to anybody."

Someday the whole world will die
Unless first we open our eyes
If we just stopped ruling our lives with lies
In anguish and frustration the kite cried,

"Shouldn't the human species just unite?!"
And on that day,
The kite got it right.



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On Friday December 7th, 2007, Zen (629) writes:
i like the simplicity of this. almost like a nursery rhyme.


On Wednesday September 28th, 2005, Dr Benway (45) writes:
Wow, anything that can make me smile this morning must be good. This was so filled with spite and sarcasm. I LOVED it. Another wonderful, Social minded poem. Way to go.


On Saturday September 10th, 2005, An Expired Member (26) writes:
Wonderful, i like to read and that one made me happy. You are good!


On Friday September 2nd, 2005, TropicalSnowstorm (698) writes:
"Found out humans are the same everywhere Even if they refuse to be." - I like how you worked this piece. Creative use of the kite to make your point...although I must say, I think unity is last thing anyone wants or prays for...


On Friday September 2nd, 2005, TropicalSnowstorm (698) writes:
and, honestly, who really would want to unite with a random sampling of their neighbors...much less with the average dweller on this planet... : ) Love your style. Ciao, T/S


On Sunday August 28th, 2005, abattoir (147) writes:
inventive,clever..and yes cute. this was good.


On Saturday August 27th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (472) writes:
wow... this was really really good... deep yet simple... an honest desire that we should all strive towards, and yet, i fear the string will tie us down no matter how hard we struggle. I am a cynical bastard, however.


On Saturday August 27th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (472) writes:
can i just point out (as this was good): you misspelled a few words in 2nd last verse... "stoped = stopped" "ruleing = ruling" and "frutration = frustration" i don't normally bother doing this, but this is good enough to deserve perfect spelling :)


On Saturday August 27th, 2005, SamoneDrone (408) writes:
hey thanks. i appreciate it. improper spelling tends to get me everytime.


On Tuesday August 23rd, 2005, AniDayz (1281) writes:
ohhh this is brilliance...beautiful+insightful...making me smile a REAL smile...


On Saturday August 20th, 2005, elisa (2018) writes:
damn..............i've never identified with a kite so much...


On Saturday August 20th, 2005, Jay Jii (336) writes:
*smiles. Nice insights. Wonderful piece. Unfortunately, the answer to the kite's question is: Yes, but they're much to greedy to ever let it happen.


On Friday August 19th, 2005, l mo (63) writes:
Kite...i like kites. i dont like this though...I LOVE IT! =D And the message it portrays is the absolute truth.


On Friday August 19th, 2005, peril_notion (123) writes:
Catchy title... powerful message. ~Heather



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