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"I Will Be the Liar" by SamoneDrone

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The Feeling dripped and dropped between the rocks
{Filtered}, [{purified}], and /[{transformed}].
I just don't know how I feel anymore.
As it seeped through the cracks,
It got closer and closer to the rapids.
The river rapids raging, as white as a lie,
As rapid as my unsettled mind.
My wandering feelings.
What do I really want?

I don't know how I feel,
I don't know what it is that I want,
I can't tell what is real.

Are you worth letting inside?
Are you worth the try?
Is this really love?
Or is this all a lie?










 
I will never fall inlove.












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On Sunday October 15th, 2006, Zen (626) writes:
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On Friday March 24th, 2006, monalisamarie (147) writes:
I love the ending..and I concur


On Sunday August 28th, 2005, abattoir (147) writes:
I will never fall in love"...great


On Sunday August 28th, 2005, abattoir (147) writes:
this was like slicing through red velvet cake. white creamy icing and rich flesh beneath..."I will be the liar


On Tuesday June 28th, 2005, An Expired Member (19) writes:
magnificient! i love your unique writing style!- summer


On Thursday June 9th, 2005, Mr King (623) writes:
sweet lies my brother told me


On Wednesday June 1st, 2005, Lotophagi (449) writes:
this is so rich in texture and emotion, great metaphorical imagery and involving questioning of self - you've made it applicable to a universal audience. Brilliant. Thank you.


On Saturday May 28th, 2005, Serenity (598) writes:
This is wonderful. Pure awesome :)


On Saturday May 21st, 2005, Astra Dei (644) writes:
lovely. very lovely


On Saturday May 21st, 2005, Leigh (24) writes:
This really touched where I am right now...beautiful!


On Saturday May 21st, 2005, DoctorAsh (506) writes:
Wonderful piece miss Sam. "I don't know how I feel, I don't know what it is that I want, I can't tell what is real". A poem is such a beautiful ear. [D&A]



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