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I'm sick of walking through this life
Being patronized and challenged by everyone that walks by.
You can't convert me.
I'll never believe your blind lies.
Your brains been warped, baby,
But you can't get mine.

Every shmuck that runs into me,
that pushes me, front-on,
Must feel obligated to offend me with their ignorance.
Well just shut those lips, hun, to do me a favor.
Do yourself one too.
Just walk away and save your breath, baby,
because I've heard this junk over and over
Through and through.

You're right,
I'm wrong.
You conform,
I don't.
You're just like every other human I've come across.

Don't worry
I get it all the time.
So don't feel bad that you forgot to sneer at me.
I must be totally obscure if I'm that hard for you to understand.

Being a feminist does not make me a lesbian.
Hating the government does not make me an anarchist.
Just wanting to love and get along does not make me a hippie.
And wanting to be free will never make me a radical.
Don't catagorize me doll.

So next time I walk down the street,
Try somthing different.
Telling me I'm wrong is futile,
Because no matter how often you critisize me,
I'll never replay it in my brain.
It means nothing to me, so stop wasting my time.

Just let me hear somthing I don't hear everyday babe.
Let me experiance somthing so true it will take my breath away babe.
Give me words to better my life.
Tell me somthing that will strengthen my morals.
Let me feel zen.
Let me find meaning.
Let me achieve happiness.
Open up my eyes,
Just enlighten me beautiful.



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On Sunday October 15th, 2006, Zen (627) writes:
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On Monday September 12th, 2005, Thorn (436) writes:
Damn straight! Stand up for what you believe in!


On Monday September 5th, 2005, precarious pixie (20) writes:
*speechlessness* this poem makes me want to tell you every you've asked for.you seem so strong standing on your own ground,i just want to say something that will sweep you off your feet.


On Friday June 3rd, 2005, MelvinOliverDrauma (552) writes:
this deserves much praise


On Friday June 3rd, 2005, Liz (406) writes:
This is a great write. I'm only sorry it took me so long to find.


On Saturday January 22nd, 2005, stormtalk (908) writes:
Only you can enlighten yourself ;) I think this is more of a rant than a poem... you might want to run your work through spellcheck, too, or polish it a little more. But I think you have good ideas and I like your style. Keep writing!


On Monday January 17th, 2005, fucken_ke_ke (8) writes:
samone, i honestly love this poem so fucking much. its amazing. just like you.


On Monday January 17th, 2005, SamoneDrone (407) writes:
child you better watch yourself, you'll turn me into a monster! you never fail to flatter me :D


On Wednesday December 22nd, 2004, DoctorAsh (506) writes:
your love struck prong lashes forth - unbuilding temples []


On Monday December 13th, 2004, AniDayz (1267) writes:
this is great,definetly i can relate. i love*love*love* the entire poem, but esp. love the last part. great**


On Sunday December 12th, 2004, stuart_pid (217) writes:
ahh, i know exactly what you mean. i just wish the rest of the world could understand this.


On Wednesday December 8th, 2004, frozen (747) writes:
this was fantastic very great much enjoyed.


On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, Black_Cherry_Doll_ (85) writes:
beautiful. i agree w/physical. This blew me away---steph


On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, physicalgraffiti (64) writes:
HOLY FUCK!!! this was so awesome. i am literally blown away. the 5th stanza was brillant.


On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, An Expired Member (4) writes:
i like the way you wrote this. fantastic.


On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, VenomPlease (180) writes:
I agree it describes the feeling well. Very to the point but well written. Nice job


On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, SamoneDrone (407) writes:
ehhh... this is more bluntly aggressive, and teen rant"ish" than most things i write, but it appropriatly describes the feeling. :/



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