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"Won't Let Them in on You" by SamoneDrone

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I held you in my arms as we closed our eyes,
Afraid to face what had become of our lives.
You thank me for all I've helped you through,
But it was the least I could do for the amount I love you.
The world closed in on us as we layed there.
Picking at the skin, trying to get through.
How much longer could we run from our fears?
Runnings not the way to go so we layed there paralyzed and vulnerable.
They pull back the skin as we begin to bleed.
There's nothing we can do,
We can't get away from them.
But I won't let them in...
Not on you.
You may think otherwise, but it's not too late for you.
They're on their knees in this shit and blood.
They're getting in.
Please close your eyes.
I don't want you to see what has become of me.
I won't let them in on you.
They scrape at my soul, and try to break me down,
I reach out for you.
Got to see if you are safe.
I look for you,
But i can't watch them break in on you.
I won't let them,
I won't let them in on you.
I can't let them,
I can't let them get to you.
They destroyed what was ours,
They destroyed most of me.
But i won't let them in on you.
I'm bruised, scratched, and bleeding.
After this is over try to nurse me back to life.
I need your heeling.
If i can't be fixed,
If there's no hope for me,
If there's nothing you can do,
I still won't let them in on you.



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On Sunday October 15th, 2006, Zen (625) writes:
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On Monday November 20th, 2006, Instant Insanity (745) writes:
Is somebody trying to get their comments up?


On Tuesday November 21st, 2006, SamoneDrone (407) writes:
? je ne sais pas.


On Saturday January 1st, 2005, Anth (1613) writes:
i adored this work, its so powerful,i felt liked youd read this to me as i sat in a plane about to crash, and was lost in your moment, safe, there was something pure in this write, that really speaks multitudes


On Sunday August 8th, 2004, Twilight (2101) writes:
this was utterly beautiful. i could stare into the metaphorical eyes of this piece all day. and fall in love slowly with something that couldnt possibly ever lack the feeling. well done.


On Thursday January 22nd, 2004, stormtalk (908) writes:
This would make a good song - I could hear it sung in an alternative style. I liked it a lot... it does a good job of getting across the feeling of wanting to protect a loved one, but without sounding corny. Rock on.


On Monday November 20th, 2006, Instant Insanity (745) writes:
NEVER LET..No NEVER GO!


On Sunday November 16th, 2003, Eowyn (10) writes:
Yours is no longer the only comment, Silver. :-D This is a wonderful poem, and I agree -w- Silver, well written, indeed. I loved it... ~Eowyn~


On Monday October 13th, 2003, Silver Spectre (90) writes:
I love the commitment on here and the sacrifice writen in such away as to feel the attacks. You write it in such away that just inspires me..please keep posting works like this~Silver~


On Monday October 13th, 2003, SamoneDrone (407) writes:
thanks for your comments i really appreciate them. and i noticed i was on your favorites so thanks a lot for your honost opinion.... asuming that your opinions were honost lol


On Monday October 13th, 2003, Silver Spectre (90) writes:
I have come bacl to read more of your work and i can't believe I have tyhe only comment on here.. If you have not noticed this is on my favs list


On Monday October 6th, 2003, Silver Spectre (90) writes:
I love the commitment of this write. Writen very well. I am totaly impressed. love the wrap at the end..awesome~Silver~



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