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i Look At My Wrists

i look at my wrists now
pulsing, calling for relief
screaming at me
to open the pores and cells
begging for the mercy
of self-pity
they seem so sad
so broken and deformed
the blood inside
fights to run rampant
the wrists shake nervously
they are looking at me
i try to ignore them
i try to overpower their demands
to save myself for another day
until my resistance gives way
and the wrists win

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On Sunday November 13th, 2005, An Expired Member (10) writes:

wow i have felt this way so many times.. but never been able to express it... thank you. amazing write!

On Friday October 15th, 2004, Nesfurata (67) writes:

Wow, that was amazing -Elizabeth

On Wednesday August 18th, 2004, AHHH (238) writes:

wow very nice...usually people just write about slitting there wrists, and you actually wrote about the feeling involved- michelle

On Thursday October 2nd, 2003, An Expired Member (44) writes:

Made my wrist tingle. Powerful words.

On Wednesday October 1st, 2003, An Expired Member (8) writes:

I agree with cryptictears, i also like suicide poems, they have alot of emotions and feelings that i can relate to. this is a great poem, thanks for the read.

On Wednesday October 1st, 2003, Bast (895) writes:

interesting. i like that you say things like self-pity... i sense you're almost ashamed you do it, but also can't seem to stop... that, at least, i understand.

On Tuesday September 30th, 2003, eternal despair (72) writes:

i like this write. i agree with cryptictears suicide poems are great, so beautiful yet sad. good job †Chérie†

On Tuesday September 30th, 2003, An Expired Member (14) writes:

I just liked the title on the home page, but this just reenforces the whole judging-book-cover thing. Good show, and PLEASE, continue...

On Tuesday September 30th, 2003, hate_doll (327) writes:

this is awesome...just like all the others...you really know how to paint a picture with your emotions...never give up...you may lose the battle...but I have great faith you will win the war ;)

On Tuesday September 30th, 2003, Drea (920) writes:

i have a poem of the same subject(if you care to look) this is very ...wow...the picture that is paints is vivid in my head.. great ~Drea~

On Tuesday September 30th, 2003, Lydia Jade (783) writes:

i say this all the time but now more then ever it needs to be said...alot of people say they hate suicide poems! but i love them they hold the most emotion and sorrow! still to each there own taste! i love this poem and i relate! good work! ~Tears~

On Thursday October 2nd, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (763) writes:

That'd be me *raises hand* Okay maybe don't hate them...just don't care for them is more like it.

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