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A New Freedom

Verse and versatility
Pain so very poignant
This is the new freedom
This is the new movement
Play your tune musicians
Slop your paint you bum
And i'll paint a picture in your mind
Of what i'm thinking of
Sloppy spitting shooting sounds
Evaluate my stupor
Crisp and clean and kosure not
The meaning of the future
This the path i take in life
This my hope of dreams
This my sillouette at night
Barely, but still seen
Take it as you like it now
Monster or a maple tree
For i've found a new kind of freedom
We call it Poetry

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On Sunday February 4th, 2007, Zen (602) writes:

i liked the idea, the poem not so much. *shrug .

On Wednesday July 19th, 2006, Michelle Xiao (481) writes:

brilliant. this is our anthem.

On Friday December 17th, 2004, braindead_poet (577) writes:

wow, what an awakening. embrace the potential of an enlightening; sieze the moment of true expression. Fear is an illusion, for we have nothing, or noone to fear; they threaten us, they mock us, haunt us, taunt us; but they stalk us out of fear.....

On Friday December 17th, 2004, braindead_poet (577) writes:

fear of things such as this; a personification, an individualization of the True Power. Grow and Flow, so one day we may Overthrow.

On Tuesday June 29th, 2004, Mr King (623) writes:

Ride this one brother and let it carry you into the atmosphere... I see great potential here in you now leaping off into the possibilities of the ecstatic and inspirational!!!!

On Tuesday June 29th, 2004, Mr King (623) writes:

SET US FREE!!!!

On Wednesday February 9th, 2005, Mr King (623) writes:

Or... be free... whichever... its all love... i would like to hear more from you anytime inspiration knocks... 1, Seth

On Friday June 4th, 2004, Mute Serenade (216) writes:

Monster or Maple Tree.... awesome... simply great... perfect ode. Sue Zen

On Friday May 28th, 2004, tears of decadence (222) writes:

yes<< the best freedoms of all< the freedom of our words< our writes and our thoughts>> i absolutely loved this peom *tears*

On Wednesday May 26th, 2004, ShadowFlight (138) writes:

great write... there's something ethereal about it that I really like

On Tuesday May 25th, 2004, glasshouse (771) writes:

Hmmm... I like this a lot. Your choice of rhetoric is catchy. Good write. -Glass

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