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Obscure Ramblings On Love

And the fifth note sets her off
Journey of a screaming tear
Holding to the gentle contour of her face
Loving every fine blond hair
To give a salty wet kiss
Manic Melody Massages My Mind's Mangled Mess
Flooding my head with dreams and my foot with motion
Struggling to define my euphoria

Marijuana hangs dryly in the air
A crying girl touched
By the music that defines her life
And there we are, sharing the same tear

My Saturday Night Hypothesis:
Life exists in the stare
Between 2 soon to be lovers
And the beat that surrounds them
Hanging in the air like the soon discarded inhibitions

A smile shatters my mellow-dramatics
It battles its weight in sobriety
Chemicals race in my veins
I am addicted without remorse

In this moment
At this verse
In this room
With this girl
I Am

I can breath easily as we move
Every pain sloughs away in the moonlight
As I confess my way home
To a stranger known to well
Praying to surpass loneliness again

Passion annexes the atmosphere
Memory fades when the heat rises
And I wake up as I belong
Panting softly at the sky
Resting next to one who can see through me
Naked and unafraid

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On Wednesday July 19th, 2006, Michelle Xiao (507) writes:

stunning depth of awareness, that blur between madness and sobriety.. and this contentment of just be.ing. amazed.

On Monday December 6th, 2004, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:

I have to comment again to state that I simply love "In this moment; At this verse; In this room; With this girl; I Am"

On Monday January 19th, 2004, no_independence (19) writes:

HOLY SHIT BRO!!! Awesome! you really do like her don't you (yes I know who its about)!

On Tuesday January 20th, 2004, Drifter (364) writes:

I was very drunk when i wrote this the first time. It was meant to describe the night i was having. She just dominated my thoughts at the time. Yes though, i do like her :)

On Monday December 29th, 2003, pushblood (37) writes:

Incredible....I loved it.. Each line over came the next so beautifully...left awestricken....Thanks for posting....~P.B~

On Monday December 29th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:

Well...just let me pick my jaw up off of the floor. This just completely smacked me in the face. I love it. This is definately going to favorites.

On Monday December 29th, 2003, purr_verse (1437) writes:

The opening line is brilliant - the immediacy just great, original and compelling. "mellow-dramatics" is also most impressive! nice stuff. purr (irritating critique: "annex's" should be "annexes". sorry.)

On Sunday December 28th, 2003, Exodus (211) writes:

Wow....This was a rush of words....I particularly like the last two lines...its ends it very well....good stuff..

On Sunday December 28th, 2003, Evil (543) writes:

addiction...deep shit..good shit. keep writing._-=Evil=-_

On Sunday December 28th, 2003, An Expired Member (63) writes:

you have a wa with words.. keep writing.

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