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"smoke rings in the dark" by kissofdeath

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i watch you from the corner
  Your fate will soon be set.
  I smoke for my satisfaction
  and watched as you wept.
  Your tears stained the pillow
  you were confused on what to do.
  But I left you some instructions
  simple ones, no clue.
  A black shiny friend to comfort you through the pain
  a couple companions to lock it and gauge.
  I have left you with the thought that I am gone from earth
  your going to take your life, without me you are hurt.
  Im going to enjoy it, sitting here alive.
  you think your going to join me a few seconds is all it will take but little do you know Im watching you meet you fate. The look in your eyes has made you realize that there is no other choice and you know you have to die
there you go beautiful I'll see you very soon. You press on the safe and push with a boom. I watch with excitment and now there is doom. I get up and stand and look into you.
Your still alive. The look in your eyes tells me you see what you have done and what you really need.
No im not an angel, I could never be, but tonight is your night, and now you see. I wanted you dead my wish has come true, enjoy your sweet death, You had it coming to you.

*kiss

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On Wednesday October 29th, 2003, braindeadpoet (127) writes:
The flow was well done. I've read a few of your writings...I really enjoy your intensity---jer


On Tuesday October 28th, 2003, SilentStalker (1318) writes:
...very dark...very evil...what a way to kill someone...let them do it...jeez, you women always seem to have us by the--*cough*...um, well, nicely done... -Darun


On Tuesday October 28th, 2003, WinterGrave (337) writes:
My head hurt now **rubs skull*, i had to read it 5 times to figure out who shot who...or am i still confuzed. either way, it was fun to read, good job.~~~grave


On Tuesday October 28th, 2003, Johny_D_Lewis (603) writes:
very vengeful...i hope i never piss you off


On Tuesday October 28th, 2003, Unbridled Pain (65) writes:
what a joker you are. i think twist of fate would be a better title. nice. U.P.



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