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There's something beautiful,
About thunderstorms in the night
Sounds that light the skies
As the rain falls and slithers down my window
Almost hoping it can last forever
These moments where nature embraces
Wanting to give my soul away
And ask it to tell me its secrets and desires
But this cannot be,
And as much as those drops
Seem like the skies stretching its arms
To feel my pain,
They are not warm like tears
And the clouds above are much too far away...

Copyright © Juan Antonìo Thomas, 2004



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On Sunday November 25th, 2007, Zen (602) writes:
you make me want to feel.


On Thursday September 16th, 2004, batman nipples (2246) writes:
Your writes are so evocative...and this one, brought tears to my eyes...I know this poem so well. That is such a good feeling.


On Monday September 13th, 2004, purr_verse (1423) writes:
stunning write; beautiful and gutwrenching, wistful and real. just divine.


On Monday September 13th, 2004, shadowsinthelight (208) writes:
You are a true dark poet. S.


On Saturday September 11th, 2004, Lynaes (1109) writes:
I felt the atmosphere of this so precisely.. maybe because it's something that a lot of people have experienced, the surrounds the emotions... this really is superb, amazing work. I wish I could say more.


On Friday September 10th, 2004, Anth (1571) writes:
superb,as always i expect from you,each time you capture me in the moments you express so sublimely


On Thursday September 9th, 2004, TheLastDragon (67) writes:
Esta muy bien! Me gusta el sentimiento detrĂ¡s la poema.


On Thursday September 9th, 2004, Midnight Orchid (158) writes:
Six-out sent this to me in an AIM conversation. I am forever glad he did. I'm speechless. I know not what to say that would dignify this piece. I must put this on my favourites. It's beautiful. Like piercing the heart with a pin three feet long. =-MO-=


On Thursday September 9th, 2004, Six-Out (1798) writes:
I don't think I've ever before felt so much from so little...I don't know what it is about this...the imagery...the realness...it's you...raw. Just great...that's all I can say.


On Thursday September 9th, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:
in so many ways this makes me feel empty. sad to say the least. "and as much as those drops, seem like the skies streching its arms, to feel my pain, they are not warm like tears"


On Thursday September 9th, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:
i can relate to the comfort of tears..very nice.



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