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As our souls intertwine in the mist of a silent grandeur,
An infinite vast of untouched beauty,
Lying beneath the puddles of our solemn tears,
On these tender lands of collective sighs and wandering eyes,
The stars above are watching
-
As our minds drift in the patterns,
Of hopelessness through the years,
Speaking of sad truths and bleak fantasies,
The stars above are watching
-
As our lives reach the end,
The bottom of fate’s frozen lake,
Gasping for nothing in the depths of everything
Wondering where the sun might be,
If maybe it died here with us,
If maybe the stars above are still watching...
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Copyright © Juan Antonìo Thomas, 2004




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On Saturday April 19th, 2008, Zen (631) writes:
Sad truths; Yeah, I know about those.


On Saturday July 22nd, 2006, An Expired Member (18) writes:
wow I really enjoyed it


On Wednesday June 28th, 2006, Astra Dei (645) writes:
This made me think of some of the poetry ive written. I think you did a wonderful job. The imagery was brilliant. I really like your style


On Friday February 17th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1057) writes:
Absolutely fantastic! I cannot put into words the beauty & magnitude of this piece. Julia~


On Wednesday March 16th, 2005, An Expired Member (7) writes:
i really like this, it seems like an accurate description of life. wonderful write, it's simple but deep.


On Friday December 17th, 2004, Valentine (509) writes:
*faves this . . Gloriously unique. I am . . in awe.


On Thursday June 3rd, 2004, missanthropic (48) writes:
after reading this i am reminded that the too often unappreciated simplistic and chaotic beauty of a moonless sky, is not empty...


On Saturday April 24th, 2004, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:
The stars as "untouched beauty" .. .very mystical and inviting as well .. .you brought a piece of heaven on Earth .. .absolutely precious to read!


On Thursday April 22nd, 2004, urbanhumility (1348) writes:
beautiful in its wholeness, this wonderment, your questions, one of my favorites............urban


On Wednesday April 21st, 2004, OLd SouL (838) writes:
ditto purr's comment. This mirrors much of whats inside of me. You are a true poet. :::OLd


On Wednesday April 21st, 2004, purr_verse (1437) writes:
gentle, magical, evocative, soothing, wise, poignant... this lovely piece reflective and infinite somehow... beautiful work.


On Wednesday April 21st, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:
Absolutely magical. Together as one living the same old life in the state our 'world' is in. That's what I got from this. Gorgeous work. -L



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