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While the overcast of a lucid moon
Awakens a dark and a weeping
While the silver knife carves a wound,
By whose will are you really bleeding?
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Those that stand watching
The drips interrupting the silence
Long lost in the moment
Passing by like nothing has happened
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My God, is it just me?
Is it just my eyes that deceive
The wisdom from which I seek
And devoid of it all
Through an error in perception
Or a flaw from your world?
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My God, can?t you feel?
How the life streams from the veins
Of those unfortunate ones
That just want to find,
 A place from where to begin....?




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On Saturday April 19th, 2008, Zen (602) writes:
Every time I read you, you blow my mind, then I kind of stare dumbly comprehending everything I've just read, and it's all beautiful too. Every.Single. Word.


On Tuesday August 15th, 2006, torn_beauty (99) writes:
nicely done! it flows so well, like a living stream of words.


On Sunday November 13th, 2005, SamoneDrone (400) writes:
amazing. this peom speaks in great volumes to me. it seems there is no place in this world where you can live the lie you want in peace. ....-samone


On Sunday August 28th, 2005, abattoir (143) writes:
toxic in it's addiction...sick write


On Sunday August 28th, 2005, abattoir (143) writes:
is it then in the loss of blood that one can truely be reborn? in the bodies fight for replacement, is something spiritual reincarnated?rendered wondering.


On Friday December 10th, 2004, Valentine (491) writes:
Hauntingly beautiful. The imagery is so vulnerable, yet so sharp, piercing. "By whose will are you really bleeding" . . a mesmeric, thought-provoking write. Excellence..


On Tuesday October 12th, 2004, urbanhumility (1377) writes:
your cadence of words take me into a daze of intricate and delicate thought........your depth is matched with your height........well done..........urban


On Thursday September 9th, 2004, An Expired Member (12) writes:
"...those unfortunate ones that just want to find, a place from where to being..." So terribly resonant. Beautiful.


On Saturday August 28th, 2004, Nadir (615) writes:
"My God, can?t you feel?" ... I have often found myself asking the same. "Why can't you see" ... Meaning the same. I think it is more of a static question. Once you ask it, it becomes a thing to live with, or/and die. I do not think it too morbid to say.


On Saturday August 28th, 2004, Nadir (615) writes:
The theme is universal in suffering, it(the feeling) can be applied to any situation of human behavior where backs are turned. Or eyes closed of all kinds of reasons. The feeling is the same. I applaud you for conveying it so well. -Nadir-


On Saturday February 21st, 2004, An Expired Member (8) writes:
Wow..very powerful words, I really enjoyed reading this.awsome write. ~wicked~


On Sunday January 18th, 2004, stormtalk (881) writes:
Hmm... I'm deathly tired of cutting. I like the title, though, and you definitely have talent in style and structure.


On Saturday August 28th, 2004, Nadir (615) writes:
It is hard to take a person serious that day after day comment about style and structure, while not being clear on why he like a simple word in his comment. If it is the context to the poem or just the word itself.


On Saturday August 28th, 2004, Nadir (615) writes:
Originality, shallowness and style. These are subjects that should be touched with care, and certainly go both ways when being a reader to a writer, or writer to a reader.


On Saturday August 28th, 2004, Nadir (615) writes:
You sir, certainly do not wield the ability of giving what you request in one of these ways. If you do in the other is not yet known to me. I am sorry to write this here, but this has annoyed me. -Nadir


On Tuesday November 25th, 2003, SnowQueen (64) writes:
This painted many pictures in my mind, I really enjoyed it. Beautiful poem, keep it up...


On Friday November 21st, 2003, The Fallen Angel (289) writes:
breath taking...you words ring like an echo lingering as it fades into my soul+Fallen One+


On Thursday November 20th, 2003, Deliverence (797) writes:
Beautiful...I love this..its going on my favs.-Kefka


On Thursday November 20th, 2003, Mr King (623) writes:
Deep feelings and ideas you bring up here... of God and fate... of human suffering and from where it comes?... of human suffering and of those whom in their separated inability to empathize with their fellow human beings are passers bye "like nothing has


On Monday December 8th, 2003, Mr King (623) writes:
happened"


On Monday November 17th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (763) writes:
Yes, very interesting indeed. My God, can't you feel? You have excellent lines in your poetry...


On Saturday November 1st, 2003, Bloody_Hands (29) writes:
And interisting write you have, I'm not sure what to think. ~Lynne



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