Shotgun Serenade, posted by SilentStalker
Author's Note
"Shotgun Serenade"

Well, those that remember "Another Snuff Film" by suicideseason probably know that I asked him to write it out because I couldn't put it on paper myself. And, well, a few years later, I finally get into a mindset where it comes to life. I dare say this competes with most of my other crazy writes. A masterpiece in its own right, as the shotgun is definitely not used often enough.

--Stalker

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On Saturday August 11th, 2007, Dommi (131) writes:
"Fuck you fast, and fucking faster This damn thing must be a master Three short minutes into it, and You're so noisy I could die " i loved this piece. it appealed to the angry shotgun-wielding disgruntled me. :) I don't believe you've lost your touc


On Saturday August 11th, 2007, Dommi (131) writes:
touch*, and what a touch it is. :)


On Saturday August 11th, 2007, SilentStalker (1360) writes:
...I think my own personal 'big evil grin moment' came around with the "suddenly the walls are soiled / as I feel a sharp recoil / everything that's been disloyal / sprinkled o nthe mattress top"...


On Saturday August 11th, 2007, SilentStalker (1360) writes:
...then again, I always get a boner over the kill when I write these sorts of things; must be why I'm officially labeled as psycho by the govt... *shrugs*


On Sunday July 8th, 2007, Err0r (579) writes:
The morbid sarcasm is delicious. I love this write. Only you have such a controlled way with giving me disturbed images. Very nice. =)


On Sunday April 1st, 2007, Evil (543) writes:
wow. you're right.. it keeps getting worse. nicely done though. you definitely made me cringe. let me know when you post again. ♥


On Tuesday March 6th, 2007, Aunty Depressant (717) writes:
I love the use of serenade, love just gone astray, ...and elmer fudd to kill the wascally wench! You sick fuck ;P Don't know why I don't visit more often.


On Tuesday November 21st, 2006, The Fool (1005) writes:
Theres always something more to say each stanza more words fill my mouth and it doesn't seem enough... You sick twisted man what would we do without you?~Gothic


On Tuesday November 21st, 2006, The Fool (1005) writes:
If only I could stop reading this blood frenzy and the sweet dripping vemon you sprewed from a pen or keys. How it just sends shivers down my spine, this gets more twisted and incredible as I read it. I don't think I'll ever stop.


On Friday November 17th, 2006, CharlottesWeb (593) writes:
Your style I love, your content...not always. Hehe...Do I like this...yes. It is scarey though...the steely resolution of the narrator...I think that is the scariest. I do like it though, and agree...one of the best.


On Thursday November 9th, 2006, hate_doll (328) writes:
fucking, best piece I've read of yours. So intensely twisted, and done so well in terms of rhyme/meter/etc. i got a chuckle out of this and a little bit of "owww..."


On Tuesday September 19th, 2006, Fornever_Never (258) writes:
I said I liked it rough .. and that I wanted to die while having sex .. but wow .. I dont think that I am enjoying the whole shutgun thing :)


On Tuesday September 19th, 2006, elisa (2035) writes:
Fucking Firearms.....diabolical.....with just a hint of romantic rage.....you bring a whole new meaning to 'pussy punishing'...hehe..... '...And for you this lovely evening Pain will get a whole new meaning...'


On Tuesday September 19th, 2006, elisa (2035) writes:
.....that line sets the stage perfectly...no threat...all promise...like i said before..i got nothing but love for you...you sick twisted fuck.


On Tuesday September 19th, 2006, The Fool (1005) writes:
Then continue to go on the ramming spree, and just make the fuckers bleed. Hehe I loved it, I sure hope nobody dares cheat on you my dear friend...hehe


On Tuesday September 19th, 2006, The Fool (1005) writes:
I'm very speechless but others, I loved the ending it really, was nice...hehe I needed to read something like this, got my blood boiling. One of those grab the pitch fork moods and shove it up there ass:P~Gothic


On Tuesday September 19th, 2006, The Fool (1005) writes:
Dear god Darun, I love you this was incredible, the anger that was dripping god I wanted to cringe away, but I wanted to read more and more. The scheme kept me holding on, the images I got....Jesus Christ in many ways


On Tuesday September 19th, 2006, purr_verse (1437) writes:
Excellent - repeat, Excellent, capital included - metre within story, with rhyme done originally, tightly and so smoothly it read as if doing this sort of thing is easy. Three cheers; this rocked and bit and snarled and danced....delightfully darkly.


On Tuesday September 19th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2414) writes:
this was a cacophony heralding human obsessional breakdowns; the discourse of relationships and the wretched nature of upheavals between lovers doing the dirty with and against each other, quie the visceral 'ride'..and in a very poetic framework...rigid a


On Tuesday September 19th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2414) writes:
and explosive stuff - Col.


On Monday September 18th, 2006, heartdripsblack (765) writes:
damn this is good.



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