Just Another Reason to Crawl Under the Blanket and Cry, posted by SilentStalker
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I just can't get enough

When non-members get pissy

That they can't read my stuff.



So go ahead and hate me.

Break down and have a fit

If your dumb ass could log in

You wouldn't get this shit!!

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Comments on Just Another Reason to Crawl Under the Blanket and Cry
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On Sunday July 20th, 2008, rage_addict (18) writes:
i can't take it with me so i starve for now? wow....deep words dude, i love the poem i could read this over and over, and still get the same feeling as the first,i've been through this.great write


On Sunday July 20th, 2008, SilentStalker (1360) writes:
...good job getting the second part of that...the first part probably explains it even moreso when you find that out...


On Sunday June 29th, 2008, totaltrip (48) writes:
oh wow. i'm in love with this. i know these words too well.


On Friday June 27th, 2008, Aurora_Light (573) writes:
i know the feeling of being alone and having your heart in the hands of another. this is a beautiful work crafted with such skill


On Tuesday August 21st, 2007, Guillotine (228) writes:
Crushing... bittersweet, disastrously beautiful and filled with elegant melancholy, soft and warming and shilling... how you managed to fit all this into a poem is beyond me, and I'm left in awe of you once again.


On Friday June 8th, 2007, silent circus (386) writes:
awe.....i cant believe im just finding this, is so sad, sacraficing, and beautiful///////*sheets are cold when no one is with you*.....awe ~*danni*~


On Monday August 7th, 2006, Fornever_Never (258) writes:
God ... I can read this over and over again .. and every time cry a tear .. I love you Darun .. I am so in love with you .. and there are times I dont think I even begin to express how much I do .. but I do


On Sunday July 23rd, 2006, your_only_love (162) writes:
oh.. my.. I particularly like the 'if this pain is the reward for love...' line/statement, so absolutely deep and true, real... this is beautiful


On Friday June 16th, 2006, Fornever_Never (258) writes:
One day darun I am going to surprise you with your own words ... and I hope I leave you as speachless as you always leave me


On Thursday May 11th, 2006, Alanarchy (1616) writes:
That last line... Simply crushed be beneath the wait of a million unanswered love notes. What can I say that hasn't already been said by more competent folk. Darun. Well done.


On Thursday May 11th, 2006, SilentStalker (1360) writes:
...though I love her, and probably won't ever be able to stop, I just feel that it's wrong to pursue her...so until things become more clear, and answers just a bit more obvious, I'm painfully standing back...


On Thursday May 11th, 2006, SilentStalker (1360) writes:
...key word "standing"...I refuse to fall, because I would fail everyone that ever tries to come to me for help...


On Thursday May 11th, 2006, SilentStalker (1360) writes:
...she means so much to me, and probably doesn't realize it; but I'll end up being able to do nothing at all if I let this rip me to shreds...using one's head is just as important as using one's heart...


On Thursday May 11th, 2006, Sin (1641) writes:
your strength is a pillar to us all..just remember even support beams need help standing up sometimes..and if you ever need to talk im there for you *hugs*


On Thursday May 11th, 2006, dying angel (1344) writes:
can i fall apart at your feet? i want to feel your words through my veins. this was heartbreaking. how could someone feel something as beautiful as this." Don't try to catch me when I fall; I don't want to pin you down as well."


On Wednesday May 10th, 2006, PoeticHellion (250) writes:
Wow. That was... wow. So empowering, confusing, beautiful.


On Monday May 8th, 2006, The Fool (1005) writes:
Now that I've maintain sanity, this was just incredible you made my heart burst into thousands of little pieces with this. You know how to work your magic no matter if you're writing stalker, or this. *claps*


On Monday May 8th, 2006, gothemite (398) writes:
well this is new.. love is a good feeling to have, even if you have to go the sucky parts to have it.


On Monday May 8th, 2006, The Fool (1005) writes:
....oh my.....Darun......this was just....I couldn't say any words....This was just amazing.


On Monday May 8th, 2006, elisa (2036) writes:
every word...... a lasting impact........i sit wreathed in the echo of each letter......... of everything i could say... you already know how i feel.


On Monday May 8th, 2006, Rachel (393) writes:
Darun... Damn. I can't say anything. Wow. I'm so glad you're writing again. *favs*


On Monday May 8th, 2006, Ezimo (269) writes:
Wow...I was talking to someone about commenting people and not having the words to say that express this persons work..and i just don't know what to say..This was wonderful i love it thanks for chearing -justin-


On Sunday May 7th, 2006, Kinkypoptart (766) writes:
Wow.. this is like nothing i've ever read before. I felt every ounce of emotion you poured into this piece... I saw the pain... This is like a forced invasion of privacy... and i should be arrested. :) *hugs* you are the best, Darun ~*~TarT~*~


On Sunday May 7th, 2006, Fornever_Never (258) writes:
Why does love hurt so good ... I know something of what you are going through and they way you played with words to express it but not tell amazing


On Sunday May 7th, 2006, SilentStalker (1360) writes:
...but I did tell; you must have missed it...


On Friday June 16th, 2006, Fornever_Never (258) writes:
yeah I know I got that after the fact God I love you .. you can fuck me with your words any time you want .. they are amazing .. breath taking ... and a word fuck might be more statisfing ... :)


On Sunday May 7th, 2006, sIo (892) writes:
does 'holy fuckin' shit' qualify as a response?


On Sunday May 7th, 2006, vaultgrl (236) writes:
...wow....Darun....i've never seen this part of you before.....it's beautiful......painfully beautiful....i am so...just.....i like this side of you....but not the feelings that make you right this way....if you can understand that....


On Monday May 8th, 2006, SilentStalker (1360) writes:
...don't like that I learned how to love all over again...? no, you can't mean that...these feelings are something I forgot, long, long ago...


On Monday May 8th, 2006, SilentStalker (1360) writes:
...if you're referring to the pain behind the words...? realize that I had a painful transition to hate earlier in life; it's understandable that the transition back would hurt just as much...


On Sunday May 7th, 2006, evolve (2232) writes:
"Yet here I stand--pieced back together By a hand smaller than my own." ........... *speechless*


On Sunday May 7th, 2006, SilentStalker (1360) writes:
...you, girly, got a good education, no...?


On Monday May 8th, 2006, evolve (2232) writes:
*smiles* Something like that..


On Sunday May 7th, 2006, Sin (1641) writes:
my god...i feel like im reading your journal..this is your heart spread out on paper, written in your tears ,and soaked in your pain..your last couple of writes have just broke me


On Sunday May 7th, 2006, hex (116) writes:
Stalker, your write is like a kidnappers note by a serial killer. You truly ARE deranged.


On Sunday May 7th, 2006, Six-Out (1825) writes:
This seesm far more sad and heart destroying than it does deranged. Are you sure you read the right poem?



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