Triolet #1: I Had An Axe, posted by SilentStalker
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On Friday February 3rd, 2006, A Burning God (61) writes:
very nice, I liked it a lot


On Thursday February 2nd, 2006, elisa (2020) writes:
....such a sweet sentiment of love.......gives me a warm feeling deep down.....*strokes cleaver*


On Thursday February 2nd, 2006, Thorn (436) writes:
I remember you typing this in the chat recently. I liked it then, so I'm glad you posted it.


On Thursday February 2nd, 2006, gothemite (398) writes:
you made that drunk? haha... i love the new format, it's creepy.. not that your writes arent always creepy. i bet you could do a really cool longer one with this kind of format.. hehe lovely job my dear.


On Saturday February 4th, 2006, SilentStalker (1320) writes:
...the triolet, and I always thought the repeating made it too simple to come up with something; guess you eventually figure out how to use it to heighten the main parts of a stanza...


On Saturday February 4th, 2006, SilentStalker (1320) writes:
...and I've decided to try this format for my second installment of my Stalker series; and that, and changing between second and third person, should add a little something to it...


On Saturday February 11th, 2006, gothemite (398) writes:
add a lil crazyness to the creepyness? woo!.. hmm forums... i only half knew they existed here... or something....


On Thursday February 2nd, 2006, gothemite (398) writes:
PS. Don't die while you're away!


On Saturday February 4th, 2006, SilentStalker (1320) writes:
..check the forums, young lady...


On Thursday February 2nd, 2006, dying angel (1328) writes:
freaky, i like it. it still sounds unfinished though.


On Thursday February 2nd, 2006, An Expired Member (16) writes:
intersting, freaky, scary, I freakin loved it ... good write


On Wednesday February 1st, 2006, Raven (378) writes:
I could see someone muttering this over and over again, with their head in their hands, as they rocked back and forth on the sidewalk in the rain. So few pieces have real-life applications like that. Pure excellence, Axeman.


On Saturday February 4th, 2006, SilentStalker (1320) writes:
...um, that was me, rambling this over and over again...how did you know that...? :P


On Wednesday February 1st, 2006, Broken_Wings12 (5) writes:
I like it alot.


On Wednesday February 1st, 2006, evolve (2293) writes:
The rhyming scheme is quite interesting.. it's got a good rhythm to it.. almost like hammering the words into my skull.. I'd like to see more of this, m'good sir. Love you, Darun.


On Wednesday February 1st, 2006, Collective Amnesia (243) writes:
hmmm...interesting, I like it, very neat


On Wednesday February 1st, 2006, The Fool (1001) writes:
I like it nice write



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