She Hurt Herself

I must confess I'm Guilty

I just can't get enough

When non-members get pissy

That they can't read my stuff.

So go ahead and hate me.

Break down and have a fit

If your dumb ass could log in

You wouldn't get this shit!!

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On Wednesday June 4th, 2008, Miss Mars (399) writes:

omg this is beautiful. i love this write. it stung me right in the heart. -mars

On Monday February 11th, 2008, An Expired Member (10) writes:

Blunt and honest. I really like it..

On Friday November 2nd, 2007, Instant Insanity (769) writes:

Dammmmnnnnnnnn..... : My hand went to my cheak reading the last stanza and my mouth dropped when I read the last line. : All I can say is damn and OMG!! This is truly my favorite poem of yours Darun. WOW!!! ][ ][

On Thursday October 11th, 2007, An Expired Member (17) writes:

very good, sad that we usually don't notice it's us until it's over.....

On Monday September 3rd, 2007, Please Press Reset (166) writes:

wow, tragic

On Friday August 17th, 2007, Reefer_rave (232) writes:

Harsh and sad, Like seeing a deer in your headlights and knowing you can't stop. Excellent description of when you don't realize something until it's to late. Makes my heart crack.

On Thursday July 12th, 2007, Err0r (585) writes:

If only more people could see these things. And understand. This is something a lot of people out there should realize. What a strong and expressive write. Very nice.

On Monday July 9th, 2007, An Expired Member (34) writes:

this one relates so well to me right now, amazing that i happened tostumble across it. the words were beautifully woven together... thank you

On Wednesday April 18th, 2007, An Expired Member (6) writes:

really awesome

On Saturday December 23rd, 2006, the dried flower (83) writes:

wow, i had to come back to this poem and read it again....... i love it so much..... you know how people will deticate songs to one another...i deticate your poem to a close freind of mine...named Amber...

On Tuesday November 7th, 2006, darth ren (40) writes:

oh my gosh, this is just so close to home, in so many ways. thanks for writing this. being able to relate to poetry is a great thing

On Thursday September 14th, 2006, Bluegirl (251) writes:

Wow. Another poem which leaves me stunned. The feelings evoked by this one are so powerful for me.. Excellent work!

On Saturday August 5th, 2006, Fornever_Never (264) writes:

Do you know I come and read your works then i will ever admitt .. and this one cuts deep .. even though you dont give me anything but pleasure ... in this I see more of why you do things ... :)

On Saturday August 5th, 2006, the dried flower (83) writes:

wow! this is one of the best poems on this site that i have read. i like the twist at the end. good job.

On Friday July 28th, 2006, The Fool (1045) writes:

Ouch this just ripped into me it was harshness into its own self; I was left to sit here bleeding in awe~nightly

On Monday June 12th, 2006, RepulsiveAttraction (111) writes:

that was genius man,great flow and awesome writting

On Friday June 9th, 2006, Fornever_Never (264) writes:

OMG darun ...... this is why when I say nothing you just dont leave it ....

On Tuesday May 23rd, 2006, MindRape (899) writes:

there they are :) I thought I'd lost these words in the deafening choke in my throat but lucky me I have friends like you to find them for me :) Great write

On Thursday March 23rd, 2006, Angst Queen (471) writes:

ouch that is about all I can do for a comment there. Damn man

On Sunday February 19th, 2006, An Expired Member (3) writes:

beatifully written, I have a friend just like the girl that hurts herself and I always ask her why. i love this poem it's a poem hard to forget.

On Saturday February 4th, 2006, MindRape (899) writes:

"Demanding answers to questions I should already know." i rather enjoy this line though...it does capture that helpless emotional flailing feeling quite perfectly

On Saturday February 4th, 2006, MindRape (899) writes:

I love this poem its beautifully structured to deliver a powerful punch to the lungs...but i seriously hope its not true and that you truely don't feed yourself or anyone else that line of bull.....

On Sunday January 22nd, 2006, dead_inside (45) writes:

wow this is so beautifully written

On Thursday December 15th, 2005, sIo (893) writes:

i'll never forget this poem....

On Wednesday December 7th, 2005, GothicBlack (269) writes:

ok, so there is a sea of comments, but i just have to add my little bit. I didn't actually see the last verse comming, so good job, beautiful poem.

On Wednesday December 7th, 2005, GothicBlack (269) writes:

Though i would have to say, it would be a little, smallest bit better if it was longer, i think. But what the hell do i know? hehe. nice write. ~gothic~

On Monday November 21st, 2005, warmaprylrain (146) writes:

oh my, you are good... ~A~

On Sunday October 2nd, 2005, CrestfallenTears (22) writes:

Oh wow, this is soo good. I love it.

On Wednesday September 28th, 2005, An Expired Member (8) writes:

thats wow, im speechless, i love the ending to the poem...

On Monday June 27th, 2005, An Expired Member (3) writes:

Incredible, man. HEAVY!

On Wednesday June 22nd, 2005, dp_whipping_girl (406) writes:

haunting yet beautiful in its honesty and despair...so few word express so much; very impressive

On Wednesday May 4th, 2005, tormentedsoul666 (79) writes:

WOW...this is amazing i can see why you are DP royalty...ts666

On Wednesday May 4th, 2005, SilentStalker (1336) writes:

...heh, thanks, but apparently, writing skills have absolutely nothing do do with the Royalty status, else there'd be many more on the level...believe me, I don't compare to some writers here; DPmail me for a list of 'em...

On Thursday April 21st, 2005, Lynaes (1138) writes:

God damn, those last four lines.. Gut wrenching to say the least.. seriously awesome work, Darun. Jesus..

On Saturday March 19th, 2005, so_skeevy (77) writes:

well, im reading it again and once again, i love it. Awesome job

On Tuesday March 15th, 2005, so_skeevy (77) writes:

wow that was awesome. Definelty one of my favorites ive read. Keep writing i loved it.

On Tuesday March 15th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1249) writes:

oh geez...i know this feeling..well done!! *FAVES*

On Friday March 11th, 2005, physicalgraffiti (64) writes:

holy shit. this is so incredible. the technique is flawless. thank you so much for the chills up my spine.

On Friday March 11th, 2005, Lotophagi (451) writes:

beautiful... stunning piece that twists my innards with barbed wire. Thank you.

On Sunday March 6th, 2005, Rain In The Willows (862) writes:

oh jesus, Darun...

On Thursday February 24th, 2005, Angst Queen (471) writes:

Wow...this...is definatly not what I'm used to from you, but wow, Darun, this is heartbreaking

On Friday February 18th, 2005, Evil (550) writes:

this makes me mope. thats crushing. what happened to horror flicks?! this is really awesome though. its from the other side of the street, not like normal writes. you amaze me.

On Friday February 18th, 2005, Emptyness Inside Me (195) writes:

so sad and so tragic, excellent job darun, flows so smoothly great job ~Emptyness~

On Tuesday February 15th, 2005, MelvinOliverDrauma (556) writes:

for fear of being redundant let us just pretend that my comment is a combination of all those comments below me....but at the same time refreashing and original with a smiley face at the end :)

On Tuesday February 15th, 2005, Astra Dei (645) writes:

THis hurts to read... because ive been on both sides. and im not sure which hurts worse...

On Sunday February 13th, 2005, Alacer_Cogitatus (194) writes:

ive felt this before. it hurts tremendasly. A_C

On Sunday February 13th, 2005, gothemite (399) writes:

how depressing....

On Saturday February 12th, 2005, nightshade (78) writes:

sex is usually right i wasn't expecting that last line this one brought tears to my eyes it makes me think of some of my own issues you should frame this one and give to all those people who abuse their spouses

On Saturday February 12th, 2005, nightshade (78) writes:

i don't usualy comment much but darun you're grat at evoking feelings and images with your words `night

On Saturday February 12th, 2005, sexually_sadistic (499) writes:

woah, this one slaps you right in the face. very hard hitting. such sorrow and despair felt from this. outstanding! ~sex~

On Saturday February 12th, 2005, A Broken Soul (103) writes:

amen to that. if only what you realized could be realized by people in my life... awesome write. i absolutely love it! ^Autumn^

On Saturday February 12th, 2005, GraySky (21) writes:

Beautiful.

On Saturday February 12th, 2005, K_Love (695) writes:

Every word hit me like bricks, this was incredible beautiful but heartwrencing all at the same time. Intense, indeed. Well written and well said.

On Saturday February 12th, 2005, LovelyAssassinx (208) writes:

Wonderful poem. sad but amazing. ~Unlucky

On Saturday February 12th, 2005, purr_verse (1438) writes:

extremely well done. deceptively simple but in fact very insightful, reflective and sad. Great metre too.

On Saturday February 12th, 2005, cucuio (212) writes:

This is so beautiful, and so sad. A masterpiece

On Saturday February 12th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (322) writes:

nice -kitty

On Saturday February 12th, 2005, DoctorAsh (508) writes:

very nice home chicken

On Saturday February 12th, 2005, Six-Out (1822) writes:

I was going to come and leave my normal shit talking comment. But yea. I just have to go to another page now...

On Saturday February 12th, 2005, Elise (267) writes:

Wow Darun. This is so sad. Intense wording. A great read from begining to end.

On Saturday February 12th, 2005, sIo (893) writes:

this was amazing. favs as well.

On Saturday February 12th, 2005, An Expired Member (16) writes:

wow, amazing...this is goin in my favorites. ~siren~

On Saturday February 12th, 2005, An Expired Member (16) writes:

ok well it would if i could figure out a way to do it...*feels like a moron* :/

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