Seven Diamonds (repost), posted by SilentStalker
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"Seven Diamonds (repost)"

Ah, my favorite mistake, if you will. Ths recounts in as best detail I could give the things I had gone through seeking love with someone during my own young years. I wanted to wait; she didn't know what she wanted. And when I finally did get back in touch with her, she had 'good news' for me, which tore me apart.

My tour in Korea started off very badly due to this. But I was prepared to give up everything I had to go back when she had contacted me again about the incident that arose in her marriage. The men's ring in the picture is the only one of the set that I let the jeweler complete; I stopped the other one from being created because I didn't want to hold onto something I wouldn't be able to use. Rather devastating moment in my life, and marked my major emotional fall. Without this event, the true Stalker would have never been...

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On Sunday February 10th, 2008, Narcissa (630) writes:
I know that this is an old post but damn my heart breaks as I read this - I sure hope yours has healed.


On Thursday April 26th, 2007, Zen (670) writes:
:( thats so sad.


On Wednesday April 18th, 2007, An Expired Member (6) writes:
love it.... you always have aewsome work... you have such great ambition.... you continue to inspire a cofused person in this hell zone called earth.


On Tuesday January 16th, 2007, An Expired Member (5) writes:
I DON'T KNOW YOU...BUT I SURE KNOW WHAT IT MUST'VE FELT LIKE WHEN YOU LOVE THIS PERSON TO THE FUCKING CORE AND THEN THERE JUST TURN THIER BACKS AND WALK AWAY LIKE NOTHIN' HAPPENED...AND I KNOW ITS BEEN TWO YEARS SINCE YOU'VE WRITTEN THIS...BUT I CAN STILL


On Friday July 28th, 2006, The Fool (1076) writes:
It cuts into me like a thin dull knife and it keeps carving me until I'm left broken on the ground ~nightly


On Friday July 28th, 2006, The Fool (1076) writes:
This one always makes me cry for some damned reason; I loved it; It was full of heartbreaking sorrow that just melted and absolved into your bones until you were weary and wanting to just get way. I never felt the hurt burn so hard through poetry


On Saturday May 27th, 2006, Vexed (107) writes:
wow...just wow...there is great sadness and hurt...but there is also the anger that can be felt by people (for some only barely)...expressive...


On Tuesday July 19th, 2005, Thorn (443) writes:
Amazing, powerful, and sad all at once. I commend you, greatly.


On Monday April 18th, 2005, Kinkypoptart (780) writes:
wow. sorry u got hurt, my dear ~*~Tart~*~


On Tuesday March 1st, 2005, Rain In The Willows (881) writes:
This thing still makes me feel sad for you Darun, *hugs*


On Tuesday March 1st, 2005, Lord Kalgalath (230) writes:
Sounds somewhat familiar, just not quite as extreme in my case. Always sucks to go through this, my condolence type applause, for a well done work about a truly bad experience.


On Monday February 28th, 2005, Sin (1680) writes:
this is just amazing...im speechless


On Friday January 21st, 2005, Raven (383) writes:
I could have sworn I commented on this... but I suppose my alzheimer-goldfish memory is playing tricks on me again... I keep coming back to read this. It's so powerful... definately a Dp classic..._Raven


On Wednesday January 12th, 2005, JiNx (142) writes:
That was beautiful.. wow just wow.. very heart breaking *huggles* and has a wonderful flow to it hunn -JiNx(ie)


On Wednesday January 12th, 2005, Elise (270) writes:
Darun this is utterly heartbreaking, it flows so nicely but its so painful to read *hugs you tight* You're way too sweet and she could never deserve you ever.


On Monday December 6th, 2004, AlluringDescent_darkbride (803) writes:
The ring made this poem an even harder hit. It's amazing how the rhyme scheme went into this and didn't change the meaning one bit. That's talent.


On Monday December 6th, 2004, AlluringDescent_darkbride (803) writes:
And hey, don't be too hard on yourself. A guy I planned on marrying cheated on me thoughout the last 7 months we were together...and I knew it but still couldn't let go.


On Monday December 6th, 2004, AlluringDescent_darkbride (803) writes:
We all hurt ourselves in one form or another.


On Sunday November 21st, 2004, gothemite (404) writes:
aw make me cry why dont you


On Tuesday August 31st, 2004, Nadir (590) writes:
*biting his finger* Man this got to me, big time. Im realy sorry you have to get such a shity deal. Damn. I applaud you big time for writing this. -Nadir-


On Friday August 13th, 2004, Mr King (627) writes:
great storytelling in poetry form... with so much meaning... young people make unwise choices... they all do... the wise must find a way to let out the pain and stay sane... your doing that here it would appear...


On Friday August 13th, 2004, Mr King (627) writes:
the wise must also find a way to move on and choose with wisdom future relationships although not allow the past to stand in the way of future happiness... not an easy task but this my friend i wish for you... 1LOVE, MR. King


On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, Dommi (125) writes:
omfg this was awesome.. i've felt several of these things.. and i was left in tears.. this is a favorite. we all know how good it feels to cry. especially when our eyes have been opened. <3Dommi


On Wednesday July 28th, 2004, Lynaes (1169) writes:
I wish could express how incredible this is, be able to do it justice.. so heart wrenchingly real, it's like you take the reader and pull them through this as it's happening.. the picture broke my heart.. just amazing work. I'm stunned by this.


On Friday July 23rd, 2004, Evil (573) writes:
this is so..heartbreaking, reasurring, and hope-filled. i really dont have anything to say that would do this justice. except that i know how shit goes, and its horrible. im sure you were saying "just fucking slit my throat already"...i love you, and i lo


On Friday July 23rd, 2004, Evil (573) writes:
ve this. wonderful work. beautiful flow.


On Saturday July 17th, 2004, King_Crazy_Dave (421) writes:
you nailed me in the heart with one of those paddles, liek the ones from dazed and confused, like 100 times.


On Thursday July 15th, 2004, serpentine_fire (212) writes:
I have read this before and I was amazed by it. So very sad and painful, yet you describe the feelings so well. and it's true girls suck. great piece ~serpentine~


On Wednesday July 14th, 2004, girlafraid (581) writes:
this was so horribly sad...girls are so stupid and evil...i hate them


On Wednesday July 14th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1798) writes:
Still cuts me deep.. And I still think this msut have been hard to write.. good work man, good work. Monkey


On Wednesday July 14th, 2004, -Oz- (176) writes:
wow, that was so...it puts me in a place where i am lost for words. still a good write, i just don't know what to say....-Oz


On Tuesday July 13th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (615) writes:
Wow, heart wrenching write. Nice ring. Amazing job


On Tuesday July 13th, 2004, Neith (32) writes:
You write so beautifully..but this..this brought a tear to my eye..though beautiful it harbors so much pain and stress..something I wouldn't wish upon anyone..though it seems it has made you a stronger person..i'm deeply sorry


On Tuesday July 13th, 2004, Neith (32) writes:
and I know I don't know you well..but..*hugs* :) ~shy vampire


On Tuesday July 13th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (555) writes:
I really like this...its beautiful. i hate people that mess you with you then come back when they've been dumped or something been there alot.



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