My Daughter's Eyes, posted by SilentStalker
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"My Daughter's Eyes"

The beginning of the end of my evil phase. This is the third of a series of poems that marked my transition back to being a positive factor in society in general. Written as a promise to someone who wouldn't leave me be until she got a good poem out of me.

Mind you, this wasn't necessarily written for anyone in particular. I wrote it as a wish, a dream of sorts of what it would be like to have someone that touched my heart in just the right way, that I'm able to see a real future when I look in their eyes. I never thought it possible for me to actually find someone like that, however. But Life has surprises in store for each and every one of us...

--Stalker

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On Thursday October 26th, 2006, An Expired Member (130) writes:
this was soo sweet


On Wednesday October 18th, 2006, Fornever_Never (258) writes:
Some times I read this 20x a day .. and still cry .. I know that it wasnt written when I was even in your future .. but words so wonderful I could only dream


On Wednesday August 30th, 2006, Fornever_Never (258) writes:
Yet again I am here looking at this amazing write .. and I cant help but shed a tear .. I think for years to come I will still read this and see more meaning to it then I think any one could possibly comprehend


On Friday June 16th, 2006, Fornever_Never (258) writes:
if only you knew how many times I read this ... and re read it and now that it holds meaning in my heart I read it more .. how did I get to be so lucky ... how did I end up with some one with a heart like yours ... how did it come to this ?


On Friday June 16th, 2006, SilentStalker (1341) writes:
...if only you realized how many times I looked at this and saw the meaning you gave to it...this was a wish; a portrayal of the things I never thought I'd see in my lifetime...and now I see some coming to life...


On Friday June 16th, 2006, SilentStalker (1341) writes:
...sometimes a question goes both ways; if you think you're lucky, how do you think I feel...?


On Friday June 16th, 2006, Fornever_Never (258) writes:
.... for the most part I know how you feel ... but then again I wish I could see deepeer into all the feelings you hide from me to ... just know that my love is strong .. and can with stand anything


On Thursday June 8th, 2006, Fornever_Never (258) writes:
Darun Still every time I look at your page I click on this poem ... I wish ... well what ever ...


On Tuesday May 23rd, 2006, Fornever_Never (258) writes:
Ehh Just going through your work .. and I know the feeling here .. nice write ...*tears* even though it made me cry


On Tuesday April 26th, 2005, Wounded (22) writes:
Tender and heartfelt,I can feel what you felt when you were writing this, for me that's one of the best parts of poetry


On Tuesday February 15th, 2005, Astra Dei (644) writes:
this is wonderful Silent. you've always been a fav!


On Saturday June 5th, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:
..."That every time I look at you I see my daughters eyes"...*tear*...this is so beautiful..wow...Butterfly..xxx...


On Tuesday April 6th, 2004, Midnight Orchid (159) writes:
*Tear falls* The last two lines... *breathless* WOW. I melted when I read it. Thank you... haha =-MO-=


On Monday March 29th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:
last line was a mouth opener... a really nice honest poem.


On Sunday March 28th, 2004, Mademoiselle_Minx (131) writes:
omgosh...ok your prob not gonna like this but can I just say how pretty this is. It just makes you feel all tingly inside...and the last two lines just finish it perfectly...awww :::skips off feeling all happy:::


On Sunday March 14th, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (989) writes:
Darun, this was great. It's really hard to comment on something when words are not enough. Awsome man, awsome. ~Ryan


On Monday March 21st, 2005, Sin (1637) writes:
as usual Ryans insight cant be beat so i will just echo him...this was truly amazing...just wow beautiful ~kristy


On Wednesday March 10th, 2004, Ophelia (305) writes:
This was very lovely,tender and so very beautiful, *sighs*


On Tuesday February 10th, 2004, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:
*still speechless* I just don't know what to say Darun...this is beautiful...


On Tuesday February 10th, 2004, SilentStalker (1341) writes:
...well, you know, I couldn't have done it without ya...


On Sunday February 8th, 2004, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:
*speechless*


On Monday February 9th, 2004, SilentStalker (1341) writes:
:)


On Sunday February 8th, 2004, Stellar (47) writes:
Aw this is so beautiful. I especially like the "I want you as my wife" part. Very nice! <3


On Saturday February 7th, 2004, gothemite (398) writes:
aw, cute poem.. i like it lots


On Saturday February 7th, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (349) writes:
that is very very sweet poem....unrelenting passion and honesty displayed here...-l-


On Saturday February 7th, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (607) writes:
Awwwwwwwe!!!!!!! I love the way this ends (I like it all actually). When you have a daughter of your own I think things like this tug at your heart.



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