Author's Note
"Watching"

This I made myself write. A lot of people didn't seem to understand the initial spark of obsession I referred to when talking about my Stalker write. This and another write were used to try to explain it in better detail; this being the later and poetic version of the explanation. As I thought, a lot of people only saw the erotic point of view from it; very few noticed how this tied directly to my Stalker mentality at the time. See them first, want them afterwards, and then the rest will come in time. I had a very methodic mindset at that point in my life; made me appear very dangerous to a select few people that heard everything I would say during the day then.

--Stalker

Watching

I must confess I'm Guilty

I just can't get enough

When non-members get pissy

That they can't read my stuff.

So go ahead and hate me.

Break down and have a fit

If your dumb ass could log in

You wouldn't get this shit!!

:D

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On Sunday December 23rd, 2007, Zen (631) writes:

Doesn't every guy fantasize about a hot girl once and a while/

On Saturday December 22nd, 2007, An Expired Member (17) writes:

Short, hard, intense and to the point. Good writing should be like good sex and this certainly was. The subject matter was erotic (to me, anyway) and it was delivered wham, bam, thank you ma'am. Loved it, loved it, loved it.

On Monday November 28th, 2005, An Expired Member (11) writes:

i like this poem.it shows that you care about the people u love.

On Wednesday July 27th, 2005, ApathysKiss (463) writes:

creepy =) now your username makes sense and just for that into favourites you go =).

On Wednesday July 27th, 2005, SilentStalker (1360) writes:

...if you thought this one explained my username, you didn't look far enough down the list for the real reasons...but yeah; I can see where you'd get that idea...

On Thursday July 15th, 2004, An Expired Member (9) writes:

I really liked this poem!

On Friday April 16th, 2004, gothemite (398) writes:

scary, love it though :P

On Tuesday April 13th, 2004, serpentine_fire (208) writes:

oooh...creepy, i like this one alot ~serpentine~

On Tuesday April 13th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:

wow-you give me this one? its pretty hot...therefore i dont deserve this one darun:(

On Monday April 12th, 2004, lollipoplips (110) writes:

this is funny, stalker.kinda creepy...

On Sunday March 28th, 2004, Markus Porkwing (714) writes:

I love to watch. That's what makes this poem so interesting. It's the tip of the iceberg of my people watching fascination.

On Sunday February 22nd, 2004, Moodswing (72) writes:

i never thought id see the day you posted something with even a slight erotic appeal to it...but i must applaud this peice...not often one can make feeling dirty sound so much fun...lol

On Sunday February 8th, 2004, Stellar (47) writes:

Ooooh I like this! I can relate to staring at something I can't have. I love the sexy feel of this poem, way to go! <3

On Sunday February 8th, 2004, Solace (1424) writes:

Very stalkerish and serial killerish i dont know if thats what you intended but thats what i got. Stalker hunting prey...

On Sunday February 8th, 2004, SilentStalker (1360) writes:

...that's about the gist of it...maybe not the serial killer part, though...

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