Ever mine..., posted by SilentStalker
Author's Note
"Ever mine..."

Finally broke my mold and made an attempt at decent lyrics for something other than metal. Short and somber, I'd figure it more of an interlude in a series of songs than a complete song itself. Nonetheless, one of my roommates did try an attempt at using these in one of his creations. If he ever makes it big, I just want a copy of the CD, dammit.

--Stalker

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On Tuesday November 21st, 2006, The Fool (1003) writes:
I don't know, I know how this goes and sad thing when I did experiance I wanted the rat bastard back, but then my head got cleared and my heart finally turned to stone, the smartest move of my life ~Gothic


On Tuesday November 21st, 2006, The Fool (1003) writes:
*sigh* Gutting my heart out and stomping onto it an hateful emotion that we never want to feel.. Everybody has these questions and when we get the wrong answers the world just sinks, and we have to find some kind of closure


On Thursday June 8th, 2006, Fornever_Never (258) writes:
Damn I am sorry that some one could hurt you that deep ... I dont know what to say other then i am sorry and I pray to god that it never happens again


On Monday March 21st, 2005, Sin (1637) writes:
not your usual style, but still awesome and brutal none the less ~But lustful hearts Hold dark secrets~ i love that line ~kristy


On Wednesday January 19th, 2005, An Expired Member (25) writes:
I love this.. Awesome lyrics. I personally understand the meaning here.. Unfortunatly.. --beautiful


On Sunday November 21st, 2004, gothemite (398) writes:
ah sadness... different indeed.. but still great


On Wednesday February 4th, 2004, Moodswing (72) writes:
i agree its nice to see a new post...and serious doesnt look so bad on you...you have flow whether its hack-slash or heart wrenching...your just damn good...


On Wednesday February 4th, 2004, Jadedwings (356) writes:
Hell yeah....sad topic...nothing hurts quite like this...but you took the expression of that to a whole other level....I feel you on this one!!! jaded


On Wednesday February 4th, 2004, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:
Darun! I'm so happy to see a new post. Even though these lyrics hurt. You can feel the pain in them. And amazing flow. I approve ;)


On Wednesday February 4th, 2004, SilentStalker (1341) writes:
...you see...? I write serious, too...! But it's just not the same flair as my hack-slash poems, ya know...?


On Wednesday February 4th, 2004, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:
Oh shush. I think they’re absolutely amazing :)


On Tuesday February 3rd, 2004, gothemite (398) writes:
oooh ow... great write


On Tuesday February 3rd, 2004, Stellar (47) writes:
I've felt these exact feelings before. This is very very good! It flows really well, and gets your hurt&angry point across. Well done. <3



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