What I Love About You, posted by SilentStalker
Author's Note
"What I Love About You"

When I showed this to some of the Korean populace, they cracked a smile and stated that this is the type of poem that the children would write to a girl--simple and cute. And I looked at them and said "that's the entire point." Sometimes the simple things are the ones that seem to go unnoticed too easily. This makes a note of all the things people seem to take for granted.

--Stalker

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On Monday April 14th, 2008, brad7193 (7) writes:
These words are simply heartbreaking. I think, no, I Know many people can relate to this including me, except the fact i'm single now...


On Monday December 17th, 2007, Zen (656) writes:
beyond sweet. priceless


On Wednesday October 18th, 2006, Fornever_Never (264) writes:
.... DAMN .. I dont know what else to say .... * vanishes away to wishful thinking again*


On Friday September 1st, 2006, elisa (1988) writes:
caught in a moment of silence....the daily axe grind [frozen] in a vacuum -the way you frame the face of love...so very intimate.


On Sunday May 28th, 2006, gbuff69 (215) writes:
i loved the last four lines the most


On Saturday May 27th, 2006, Vexed (108) writes:
completely blew me away...it was so sweet that I almost thought a female wrote it...it was so sweet that it almost made me cry...it reminded me of the poem from the movie "Ten Things I Hate About You" I think I will bookmark it...


On Friday April 2nd, 2004, gothemite (400) writes:
hehe i think i read this before but i'm not too sure.. it's cute, made me smile.. nice job


On Saturday November 29th, 2003, Moodswing (72) writes:
wow.....i should expect the unexpected...but this was like finding a cavern full of precious gems....you are amazing


On Tuesday November 18th, 2003, OLd SouL (848) writes:
very touching. I am glad you shared. :::OLd


On Tuesday November 18th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (532) writes:
aww the stuffing inside the psycho bear...nice to know behind every shield there is a body...Loved this piece Darun...*smooch* *Vel*


On Tuesday November 18th, 2003, Liz (413) writes:
So killing bitches isn't the only thing that makes you all warm and fuzzy, eh? You see there, I knew you weren't just a creepy necrophiliac. This is a wonderful write, you kept going where I would have run out of steam, and closed beautifully.


On Thursday November 6th, 2003, changed_angel (59) writes:
yeah as said above...sweet.....it's that a guy can actually write things like this down....right on


On Thursday November 6th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (803) writes:
Awww...I haven't read this one before. It's so sweet. LOL...Yep, I think you're losing axe points as I type this. Really though...this is...awww...lol


On Thursday November 6th, 2003, SilentStalker (1331) writes:
...yeah...one reason I was contemplating not posting these...oh well...even the axeman has a heart somewhere...haha...



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