Through the Crack Between the Seats, posted by SilentStalker
Author's Note
"Through the Crack Between the Seats"

This was the epitome of my obsessive writes. No embellishments like violence, unneeded words, restricting schemes, or whatnot. Pure desire, written approximately one hour after the actual incident. Yes, this is completely true. And no, she never had a clue I was staring at her. Then again, I never did see her again during my tour in Korea, so it's not like it matters much anyway.

--Stalker

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On Tuesday July 8th, 2008, Bast (896) writes:
a chance glance at a pretty girl can be mesmerizing.


On Monday March 17th, 2008, insideout (61) writes:
Spooky, nice write!


On Sunday December 23rd, 2007, Zen (629) writes:
Do you really wear a beret?


On Sunday December 23rd, 2007, SilentStalker (1341) writes:
...I did while I was in the Army; that was part of the uniform in Garrison at the time...


On Tuesday January 24th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1160) writes:
this is truly beautiful.


On Saturday December 10th, 2005, Adaml (249) writes:
you have no clue darun...


On Saturday December 10th, 2005, Adaml (249) writes:
just so you know... this is not something you share to scare me :)


On Monday January 17th, 2005, Chimauron (126) writes:
I remember you telling me about this one the day you posted it. Damn, I forgot how deep some of your work gets. Mind if I borrow some of this for a subliminal in one of my more creepy songs?


On Monday January 17th, 2005, SilentStalker (1341) writes:
...so long as I actually get to see my work in action (meaning send me a copy), you already know the answer to that...when didn't I let you use one of my works...?


On Thursday January 13th, 2005, Emptyness Inside Me (194) writes:
as always another great write darun, this one in particular was so vivid that i could imagine the whole thing as if i was in your shoes at that moment great job ~Emptyness ~Josh`


On Wednesday April 14th, 2004, Cinn (188) writes:
oh yeah i see why you told me about this oh how great obsessions are....good write


On Sunday November 2nd, 2003, braindead_poet (581) writes:
kill her, give her a formaldehyde bath and keep her in your closet. i read this and all those memories came crashing back of lost obsessions; something you want, you have to have; you need to get. Take if necessary. outstanding capture of singular thought


On Wednesday October 29th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:
Hmm...usually if someone leaves that kind of impression on me, I make some kind of move to talk to them. Guess I'm just outspoken though. Hey I figure you only live once, right?


On Sunday October 26th, 2003, Delilah (132) writes:
he he he...my hair's dirty blonde...no, this was a good write though...FELT it the whole way through...~Delilah~


On Saturday October 25th, 2003, An Expired Member (29) writes:
i must admit i wouldn't mind being her


On Saturday October 25th, 2003, Crystal Passion (257) writes:
Magnificent work Darun, what a lucky lady to catch your attention. XXkRYzXX


On Saturday October 25th, 2003, Urban Shipwreck (989) writes:
Man I feel you on this. Sometimes I wish I actually had some pimp skills but I'm a word fumbling idiot which is probably why I'll stay alone for a long, long time:) -Ryan


On Saturday October 25th, 2003, Drea (934) writes:
wow..some girl huh. that was beautifully sinful. i'm touched..but i'm hot..i love this. ~Drea~



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