Dismemberment (Pain), posted by SilentStalker
Author's Note
"Dismemberment (Pain)"

Written during the time I was participating as an accompanying lyricist for a roommate who was attempting to become a musician. He was a R&B fanatic; I was a metalhead. And while I'd help him with lyrics in his style, I'd try my hand as well at creating lyrics for my preference. Ths was one of my successes.

This particular song was written with Cannibal Corpse in mind, as it is meant to be extremely fast paced. I intended for the bridge lyrics to have a rough interlude in between them, lasting approximately the time of one of the complete verses. Very quick, very powerful, very hateful. I enjoyed conjuring it up very much.

--Stalker

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On Friday January 13th, 2006, The Fool (1003) writes:
Sounds like a song and very beautiful


On Sunday March 13th, 2005, An Expired Member (29) writes:
Beautiful, lovely words of a splited tounge. Keep writing shit like this. Dearest friend, i am keeping this one for my collection of favorites :D


On Friday October 24th, 2003, An Expired Member (19) writes:
AWESOME poem, Reminds me of thoughts that go through my head on a daily basis!! The content and style were both amazing. It was fucking great!


On Friday October 24th, 2003, manywalks (950) writes:
Now this dug in with rapidity, devouring itself along the way. Wonderful. ~ mw


On Thursday October 23rd, 2003, An Expired Member (11) writes:
Wow... the rhythm here is amazing. Great write. Seriously great. Twisted... but great. *n*a*


On Monday October 20th, 2003, An Expired Member (29) writes:
stalker you never cease to amaze me. this is one of your best so far and i sincerly hope you put up plenty more


On Monday October 20th, 2003, Johny_D_Lewis (607) writes:
wooo...mmmm powerful...can buzzing from this write


On Monday October 20th, 2003, gothemite (398) writes:
aah i wish i could put rhymes together as good as you lol.. its just not fair!.. good job


On Monday October 20th, 2003, SilentStalker (1341) writes:
...rhyming isn't the only thing that encompasses poetry...I always look forward to reading your works...


On Monday October 20th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (529) writes:
awesome....an excellent cannibal corpse tune thid would make...absolutely Loved the lyrics ...such hate and anger...Mmmmmmm


On Monday October 20th, 2003, Urban Shipwreck (989) writes:
Oh damn, very great flow to this. I loved the rhyme scheme, worked very well for this. As it flowed toward the end I could see the train coming but was like a deer in headlights, very awsome job man. ~Urban Shipwreck~


On Monday October 20th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:
And you said you weren't good at lyrics. I could feel the beat of this one pound into my head as I read. Very good...and I'm critical about lyrics...don't know why...But anywho...this was lovely :)


On Monday October 20th, 2003, kissofdeath (14) writes:
Darun you never cease to amaze me. the waiting for that was worth it. You are an amazing person. could I be introduced to your chainsaw? _*kiss your greatest fan



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