The Lake, posted by SilentStalker
Author's Note
"The Lake"

once again, inspired by darkbride. Though she had apparently made it her goal to drag me out of my dark phase, she also embraced my evil side as well, as I guess she was mildly intrigued by it. This was a mutation of an idea she threw at me; I couldn't get an exact match, as this is what came to mind. One of the few where I actually showed a tinge of regret. Very unlike me at the time.

--Stalker

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On Saturday December 22nd, 2007, An Expired Member (17) writes:
Beautiful. I see such beauty in a man that kills the woman he loves. That is, perhaps, sick but it is also the way I feel. Had I not found my Dark King already, I might have to wonder about you...


On Monday February 5th, 2007, TheProphetUntold (357) writes:
Very well written, the rhyme, words, the images. Are all really done too well... Like it's actually happened...haha Awesome story. Brutal and heartwrenching. +tpu+


On Tuesday January 20th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:
cool i could read these for hours


On Wednesday October 22nd, 2003, An Expired Member (29) writes:
seems i havn't commented on this one yet. its a great work, it really is, and there was a great deal of feelings coming from it, at least for me


On Wednesday October 15th, 2003, TheMistressBucket (19) writes:
This is just so beautiful. Makes me want to fall in love. *Misty eyed*


On Tuesday October 21st, 2003, Cinn (188) writes:
wow you were definately feelin somethin with this - it really gets you


On Tuesday October 14th, 2003, gothemite (398) writes:
ooo creepy .. i like it, good job


On Tuesday October 14th, 2003, hate_doll (328) writes:
hm...I wish this could be the solution to all our backstabbing ex's ::dreams:: whelp, this was great, as always, wolf explained it well, a twisted tragedy...


On Tuesday October 14th, 2003, SilentStalker (1360) writes:
...and no blood, for a change...hehe...


On Tuesday October 14th, 2003, An Expired Member (2) writes:
He's just good at that...bravo a twisted tragety...wolf


On Tuesday October 14th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:
Yes, he is.


On Tuesday October 14th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:
But there are no floating heads! *pout* How rude! LOL...delicious darling. How is it you make killing people so entertaining and poetic?


On Tuesday October 14th, 2003, SilentStalker (1360) writes:
...dunno...I keep reading over this one, and the deepness of it gets greater each time...wierd...



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