It Wakes, posted by SilentStalker
Author's Note
"It Wakes"

Funny how the really simple evil writes seem to convey the biggest message. This was actually one of the many writes inspired by Type O Negative's "Slow, Deep, and Hard" album. This is the only one, however, that wasn't a rage write. Something about that band that inspires a lot of not nice things.

--Stalker

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On Saturday June 28th, 2008, snakeskingrin (81) writes:
The sing-song verse reminds me of me!!! I like the way you eliminated any extra words in this piece...poems that are TOO long are only jeweled prose in my book. I just gotta laugh, we really have a lot in common in our style!! :)Snake


On Tuesday April 19th, 2005, Kinkypoptart (755) writes:
beautiful flow and beautiful way of capturing so many alluring thoughts. Wonderful. ~*~Tart~*~


On Wednesday April 14th, 2004, gothemite (398) writes:
creepy.. it's cool though


On Monday October 13th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (763) writes:
I feel like I've been left hanging...I think this one could continue on...and you know, they're not too far off with the music thing. Your words are musical...


On Sunday October 12th, 2003, Silver Spectre (90) writes:
hmmm could such a monster have lullabies in it's head...me thinks so..very tight and image filled write~Silver~


On Sunday October 12th, 2003, eternal despair (72) writes:
i like it very much godo write


On Saturday October 11th, 2003, Vampira (111) writes:
This is awesome!!! I love it, this should be the opening monolog for Jeepers Creepers, this is just spooky, gives me the creeps...good job!


On Sunday October 12th, 2003, Crystal Passion (257) writes:
oh whoa! i was thinking the same thing!! exj darun my dear! -kRYz


On Saturday October 11th, 2003, Vampira (111) writes:
ps. props on the Pete Steele lyrics, I worship the God that is he!


On Saturday October 11th, 2003, Lady_Lilith (113) writes:
Nice. I could really feel the dark atmosphere. And it's amazing how the way in which you display words seem to sound like music as I read it... Very,very good. *Lilith*


On Sunday October 12th, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1761) writes:
Yea the musik is what i feel.. Nice write psyco boy..


On Monday October 13th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (763) writes:
*Laughs at Monkeys psycho boy comment*



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