Jackhammer Rape

I must confess I'm Guilty

I just can't get enough

When non-members get pissy

That they can't read my stuff.

So go ahead and hate me.

Break down and have a fit

If your dumb ass could log in

You wouldn't get this shit!!

:D

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On Saturday December 22nd, 2007, An Expired Member (17) writes:

Oh, I REALLY like this one. You and I have many of the same sentiments. The punishment should fit the crime.

On Tuesday February 6th, 2007, Tania (304) writes:

woah!ill have to agree with sinister..demented but yes very entertaining!

On Tuesday February 6th, 2007, The Spiral Downward (387) writes:

Love This One . . . Demented Yet Entertaining . . . Excellent!!!

On Tuesday February 6th, 2007, Mylissa (1075) writes:

Intense...I am speechless.

On Tuesday February 6th, 2007, RepulsiveAttraction (109) writes:

Sweet Maniacle violent revenge .I LOVE IT.

On Monday November 28th, 2005, An Expired Member (11) writes:

i love this poem!

On Monday January 17th, 2005, Chimauron (123) writes:

Yo Darun, I know some folks down in Palm Beach that might actually enjoy this sort of thing... I forwarded the URL to them. No need to thank me bro ;)

On Thursday July 15th, 2004, Twilight (2101) writes:

holy shit stain this was classic! no one holds a rage inside quite like you. and i wouldnt blame you if you actually did this.:)

On Thursday July 15th, 2004, An Expired Member (9) writes:

this was a good one.it was a little funny at the time but then again it was a little disturbing.

On Wednesday October 22nd, 2003, An Expired Member (29) writes:

someone had to have seriously pissed you off and frankly i love it, your ideas of punishment are down my alley(long as its not used one me because that would suck)

On Wednesday October 8th, 2003, HeLlSeND (58) writes:

wow...i can't believe ppl get upset at your poetry....i laughed all the way through this thing.....some people's kids...

On Wednesday October 8th, 2003, SilentStalker (1320) writes:

...you've helped me open a door to a more vicious vocabulary...wouldn't have made this or the chainsaw one without your help... -Darun

On Tuesday October 7th, 2003, Delilah (132) writes:

I agree with ~Bast~ on this one...this seems to be a touchy piece you've written here. I didn't think rape though, I thought revenge and revenge is sweet...~Delilah~

On Monday October 6th, 2003, Nadir (619) writes:

Woot ... How sick indeed. Ya know first carecter second carecter or third. That is the only question here. And that is not allways relevant. Who you take side with as a writer. It is up to the viewer. ¦Ñªê

On Monday October 6th, 2003, Nadir (619) writes:

As allways, you are the man to freak me out. I need freaking out, if Im to keep sharp. Great piece. ¦Ñªê

On Monday October 6th, 2003, Bast (895) writes:

you know... this is a furious piece that speaks to revenge. rape is a scary thing- but this is more like mutilation. poetry is expression. never apologize for your art.

On Monday October 6th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (529) writes:

dont use any lube either....hard and dry....*winx*

On Monday October 6th, 2003, gothemite (398) writes:

aahh that one made me cringe lol.. but good job just the same, i hate people that cheat

On Monday October 6th, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets (70) writes:

damn you got some real inner demons there my friend,very interesting piece,thanks for sharing

On Monday October 6th, 2003, Urban Shipwreck (985) writes:

Wow, payback is the mother of all bitches. "I'll turn this up a little more And FUCK YOUR LIFE AWAY!" Awesome. ~Urban Shipwreck~

On Monday October 6th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (764) writes:

Well uh...that's interesting. A very interesting punishment. Hmm...remind me not to piss you off in any shape or form, k? *grin*

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