My Love(My Axe), posted by SilentStalker
Author's Note
"My Love(My Axe)"

It was not my intent at first to tie this one back to the beginning; only after about half the way through, I had the inspiration to try to transition it back to the start. The rhyme scheme is one I rarely use and highly favor for its feel. One of the only writes I have that the character successfully shares a bond with an inanimate object. well, inanimate until swung, I guess.

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On Friday August 10th, 2007, elisa (2035) writes:
Poe, incarnate...... with a splash or two of blood...... which i love of course...... The Axe, your lover.... split the flesh and share the sacrifice.... pure and brutal. i love ...


On Sunday February 5th, 2006, xserratedsoulx (279) writes:
i'm scensing a pattern with this whole ax thing... ~lauren~


On Monday July 19th, 2004, Northstar (455) writes:
this is a really eerie piece--I love it because the rhythm and flow are so soft and sweet, yet the words are talking of murderous sprees--nicely done


On Wednesday October 15th, 2003, Juggalotus (73) writes:
Reminds me of something....oh yeah,"My axe is my buddy.." Ahhh, the Insane Clown Posse.I like the description, I can see the bloddy axe and mutilated corpses


On Thursday October 16th, 2003, SilentStalker (1360) writes:
...and I am the man to give you axe poetry...just ask all my other buddies...hehe...thanks.


On Tuesday October 7th, 2003, Crystal Passion (257) writes:
such a heartwarming tale about a boy and his axe... it's more classic than lassie!


On Monday October 6th, 2003, gothemite (398) writes:
that was cool.. i love the way it rhymed, good job


On Monday October 6th, 2003, Urban Shipwreck (989) writes:
Aww nice. There's nothing sweeter than spending some time with a lover on a Bonney and Clyde style killing spree. Touching:p ~Urban Shipwreck~


On Monday October 6th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:
"Chop, chop, chop, chop, chop, chop, chop, chop, chop, chop, chop, chop" Now put this in the background as you read this poem. Funny, no? I love your rhyme schemes...have I ever mentioned that?



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