This Ring, posted by SilentStalker
Author's Note
"This Ring"

Written whilst staring at a specific ring (anyone guess which one?). An attempted rhyme scheme that I hadn't used very often, as finding four rhymes like that can be a bit of work sometimes. The story itself is solid, full or vengeance and detail, and fortunately fictional. This took the basic human emotions and brought them to life. Not my favorite, but definitely one that I hold a bit of pride for.

--Stalker

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On Saturday December 22nd, 2007, An Expired Member (17) writes:
Oh, dude, I really, really like this one. I had thought from the title it might be a twist on the whole "With this ring, I thee wed" thing but it was even better than that.


On Wednesday November 30th, 2005, An Expired Member (11) writes:
it was really depresive,but yet really good.i like it!


On Monday June 13th, 2005, An Expired Member (31) writes:
From such hate, you bring such a wonderful piece. Your string of words make it sound like a beautiful song. You almost make me feel guilty.


On Friday April 1st, 2005, rondant (76) writes:
wonderful write....right on.............Ronda


On Wednesday April 14th, 2004, gothemite (398) writes:
ha.. thats awsome... sad .. but awsome


On Tuesday January 6th, 2004, suicideseason (2141) writes:
i love your style...it's to die for. "You found his head the other day When you went to his house to play"...truly fucking brilliant.~season


On Thursday October 2nd, 2003, Drea (929) writes:
*emails this poem to my ex* he is lucky i never came for him...ggrrrr *breathe* i'm ok again....great write~Drea~


On Thursday October 2nd, 2003, SilentStalker (1320) writes:
...hahaha...don't let my madness affect you...unless it's voluntary...hehe...I love the way we love to hate sometimes...


On Tuesday September 30th, 2003, An Expired Member (11) writes:
oh, i loved this. it will be stinging in my mind for quite a long time.~jul-bug


On Tuesday September 30th, 2003, An Expired Member (20) writes:
Darun, your anger and pain are like diamonds in the rough, they are sharp and jagged on the outside, but beautiful and pristine on the inside. I sound like such a pansy sometimes.


On Tuesday September 30th, 2003, An Expired Member (20) writes:
Everyone pick on this guy, he comes up with a lot of good stuff. j/k seriously, good write. The violence only makes me love it more.


On Tuesday October 7th, 2003, Crystal Passion (257) writes:
hehe well put ether my dear, btw i dont think you are a pansy :P just maybe a tad frilly ;) jk!! -kRYz


On Tuesday September 30th, 2003, HeLlSeND (58) writes:
hehe....the burning hair, the sweet smell of success, you didn't care, well now i care less......Nice piece


On Monday September 29th, 2003, Urban Shipwreck (985) writes:
Nothing spells quality like a well thought out payback poem. Very well done silent, loved it. ~Urban Shipwreck~


On Monday September 29th, 2003, Delilah (132) writes:
See...now this is the kind of thing we should all be allowed to do when someone fucks us over...wicked...~Delilah~


On Monday September 29th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (529) writes:
mmmm dark cold and delicious...a wondrous piece here I must say...I love the pain, the raw emotion and the vengeful spirit, shows you are human indeed...


On Monday September 29th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (764) writes:
Oooh...Now I really like this one. The ending packs a powerful punch that rounds out this entire poem.



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