But No Help Came, posted by SilentStalker
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"But No Help Came"

This one is an exaggeration of an incident that happened to a friend of mine. One of the only writes where I tried writing from the female point of view for a change. A very early write, and still holds a lot of meaning for me.

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On Tuesday November 7th, 2006, An Expired Member (6) writes:
wow that is amazing. and i honestly feel for that person. its hard to think that you know exactly how they feel.


On Friday June 9th, 2006, Fornever_Never (258) writes:
I think there is more underlying in this poem than you say there is .... but ... then again who am I


On Saturday June 10th, 2006, SilentStalker (1360) writes:
...although it may seem as such, this was an exaggeration of an incident one of my friends went through, just to get the attention of the people around us about such incidents...


On Saturday June 10th, 2006, SilentStalker (1360) writes:
...although some part of my own past may have contributed to my understanding of such an issue, it was not the focal point of the write...I actually recently saw the one I had dedicated this to, and she is doing well for herself...


On Saturday June 10th, 2006, SilentStalker (1360) writes:
...but I think she never did actually know that I had written that...had she, she might not have known what to think...


On Friday March 18th, 2005, Beautiful Scars (245) writes:
No words can describe the way this poem makes me feel, I went through something similar to this. Amazing work -Fairy


On Tuesday February 1st, 2005, Emptyness Inside Me (194) writes:
Wow, amazing darun, this was really good. Its very sad that really bad things like that happen in the world more often than most people think. you did an excellent job on this my friend ~Josh~


On Saturday February 28th, 2004, An Expired Member (14) writes:
i'm in tears, because that's how it fuckin happens, more people need to fuckin know that it hurts *bows* thank you my friend


On Monday December 1st, 2003, UnsilentMajority (22) writes:
masterpiece


On Monday November 17th, 2003, sole (114) writes:
This poem is amazing. Definitely one of my favorites.


On Sunday October 19th, 2003, An Expired Member (5) writes:
i love this. it reminds me of well me. i do really like this


On Tuesday September 23rd, 2003, cre (508) writes:
oh wow . . such a horrific story . . but you wrote it amazingly . .


On Tuesday September 23rd, 2003, angelunderneath (75) writes:
I would love to say that this is a great write but I find that hard to say about something so inhumane...How someone can do such a thing is beyond my comprehension. Moving, and very thought provoking


On Tuesday September 23rd, 2003, An Expired Member (44) writes:
This poem left me speechless. The words and the images it creates are so powerful - it really gets inside of you. Beautiful work.


On Tuesday September 23rd, 2003, Ophelia (305) writes:
I'm close to tears, the cruelty of mankind are we not a terrible speicies, we rape,kill,and destroy what we don't understand. Sorry it just made me angry and sad all at the same time.......O.


On Tuesday September 23rd, 2003, Nadir (631) writes:
Shaking not alone, Of beauty this is the alter, Pain it did not live in only one, Let us just try, Even if we pretent, That pain we can share, To make it less and less in this, Let us try. Tiger


On Tuesday September 23rd, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:
I can understand the shaking...as I got to the end I started shaking. Such a horrible thing...


On Tuesday September 23rd, 2003, SilentStalker (1360) writes:
This poem gave my whole class (including me) a huge awareness of the issue. And no further incidents after that. So the true story finally had a somewhat happy ending, in a somber way...


On Tuesday September 23rd, 2003, Nadir (631) writes:
Thats...just...*speechless*



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