Heart on the Table, posted by SilentStalker
Author's Note
"Heart on the Table"

Sung to the tune of "Deck the Halls", if it wasn't obvious enough. Done first and foremost for the Evil Carols Contest, but I was also well overdue for a write, anyway.

--Stalker

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Poets Bookmarking This Work None! This wasn't worth the copy/paste job to put it up on the page! Or maybe it just didn't hit anyone right yet.

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3) Feel sorry for my uncreative ass, and Bookmark it.


I must confess I'm Guilty

I just can't get enough

When non-members get pissy

That they can't read my stuff.



So go ahead and hate me.

Break down and have a fit

If your dumb ass could log in

You wouldn't get this shit!!

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On Monday June 9th, 2008, The Fool (1001) writes:
You seem to take it out better then I can, your rage sizzles hotly and boils to the deepest cores of the earth.. Hurt, it burns me so badly every time I read this.


On Wednesday April 23rd, 2008, Zen (626) writes:
this makes me sad


On Saturday February 23rd, 2008, zanewill (111) writes:
great ballad


On Saturday December 22nd, 2007, An Expired Member (17) writes:
I love the format. It looks like action, then the thoughts behind it. It reminds of Stephen King somehow. And he is probably my all-time favorite author. This is powerful, intense and direct.


On Tuesday December 18th, 2007, Mab (997) writes:
wonderfully wicked!


On Monday December 17th, 2007, serpentine_fire (209) writes:
i fuckin love this, and i have missed reading your work. awesomeness ~Shell~


On Monday December 17th, 2007, Velvet_Raventon (696) writes:
Love the structure!


On Monday December 17th, 2007, SilentStalker (1320) writes:
...haha, thanks; the third 'fa la la' part was the hardest since the syllables were stressed differently there...once I got that bit done, the rest seemed to be a cakewalk compared to it...


On Tuesday December 18th, 2007, Velvet_Raventon (696) writes:
Omg that "fake" poem about logging in is hilarious!!


On Monday December 17th, 2007, elisa (2018) writes:
cold.. decisive. the systematic severing of a heart. ........ a passionate murder ...with surgical precision. ...so exact... it felt bloodless. the axe man lives. nicely done.


On Monday December 17th, 2007, Aunty Depressant (687) writes:
Gripping, cutting edge!


On Sunday December 16th, 2007, Kui (728) writes:
Dude... I love it. Short, but perfect.-Airi


On Sunday December 16th, 2007, veingo (584) writes:
Now this is the kind of little ditty that could be stuck in my head for a while. ^V^


On Sunday December 16th, 2007, mysterylove (80) writes:
short yet perfect. i always have loved your work.=)



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