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Familiar Failure

I have seen that look
In others' eyes before
What grew has died
The fire is gone
Languished
Extinguished
And out of ashes
Rise deceptions
That make each iris
Seem a darker shade
From when I used to know them
I do not know yours anymore.

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On Friday December 24th, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (989) writes:

"And out of ashes Rise deceptions That make each iris Seem a darker shade" These lines were great, as was the entire message given. Very well done. ~Ship!

On Saturday July 3rd, 2004, An Expired Member (6) writes:

Me likey - real stuff - so nice to know other people have the same views on life.

On Tuesday June 22nd, 2004, Mute Serenade (216) writes:

damnit, i wish i could comment like capt. It was mahvelous dahlink. Sue

On Saturday June 19th, 2004, glasshouse (801) writes:

Wow... "out of ashes...darker shade" thats beautiful. You truly have a talent beyond my own words. Loved it. -Glass

On Wednesday June 16th, 2004, suicideseason (2144) writes:

_what a heart mangling piece...you have a way of reaching into me and shaking the foundation of my feelings...shaken...not stirred...and the last line...it's a fucking Killer...awesome raw display...not drunk...still love you,Matt.;)timchrist

On Wednesday June 16th, 2004, Rebirth (81) writes:

This is awesome...it gives me a pensive feeling. Great work man.

On Wednesday June 16th, 2004, capt_funguy (998) writes:

" i know it's over , still i cling .... " ... pilot lite is out ... temperature drops , and all is raw ... cool man ... funguy

On Wednesday June 16th, 2004, suicideseason (2144) writes:

_and i agree with you,Kirk...this piece was colder than when we squared off with the Thing that fateful night...

On Wednesday June 16th, 2004, capt_funguy (998) writes:

that was pretty freakin cold tim ... and yes , i agree entirely with you ,,,, as always ... funguy

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