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I Will Be Far From You Forever

Go ahead
Unclench your hands
Release your grasp
I will slip on through
Between your fingers
Like the sand I am
Then land upon the beach
And wash away
With every wave
But when you look down
At empty palms
When I am gone
Do not get on your knees
To dig for more
For any grain of sand of mine
You threw away
Do not search
For what had been
You will never find sand
Like me again.

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On Sunday September 4th, 2005, wannabe_rebel (25) writes:

I wouldn't trade sand like you for anything =) I love this poem. The rhythm of it fits the words, and the pictures you paint are astounding.

On Sunday April 3rd, 2005, Sin (1639) writes:

this captured my mood perfectly right now...i think its human nature to seek comfort in the things we let go after its too late, wonderful write ~kristy

On Saturday April 2nd, 2005, eastpatient (62) writes:

This is just beautiful. Thoughts that I've had that I've never been about to convert into words, you did. Insta-fave.

On Saturday November 6th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:

Life's a bitch, & a beach too, huh Matt? :) Good write!

On Saturday July 3rd, 2004, An Expired Member (6) writes:

man i love your relations to life and yourself to different things so cool

On Friday June 25th, 2004, DarkNTormented (17) writes:

i love it!! i like the comparasion with the sand ~*~dark~*~

On Wednesday June 16th, 2004, capt_funguy (1002) writes:

powerful projection , dug the accepted self reduction becoming something more , and valuable ... like a snowflake is one of a kind ... very freakin cool man .... funguy

On Tuesday June 15th, 2004, cre (508) writes:

Mm . . I like this alot . . it's concise and hard . . short but says so much. I picture someone with a very knowing look in their eyes. I enjoyed reading.

On Tuesday June 15th, 2004, Rebirth (81) writes:

The power in the words and hurt is so bold. You did a great job on this.

On Tuesday June 15th, 2004, Six-Out (1822) writes:

Damn...when you can get a one word comment out of me you own, and this owns. Wicked dude.

On Tuesday June 15th, 2004, Lydia Jade (788) writes:

great write...so much meaning...saddenes me really...for memorys that sparks tears....anyways awsome write

On Tuesday June 15th, 2004, Jedi_MindFuck (321) writes:

excellent write, chor. subtle yet unforced rhymes...the imagery-perfect..you don't know what you have until it's gone..i know what i didn't have...now i'm gone. peace out. ///Jedi\\\

On Tuesday June 15th, 2004, Choronzon (237) writes:

I feel so loved.

On Tuesday June 15th, 2004, suicideseason (2146) writes:

_dude...i thought i was losing my mind...lol...what can i say...they watch you drowning...they watch you get washed out to sea...as soon as you're gone,they want you again...

On Tuesday June 15th, 2004, suicideseason (2146) writes:

...and this is when you want to tell them,"IT'S TOO FUCKING LATE FOR ALL OF THAT SHIT YOU FUCKING IDIOT...YOU WATCHED ME DIE!!!"...or maybe that's just me...very powerful due to the sharpness of the imagery...i love you,Matt.:)

On Tuesday June 15th, 2004, suicideseason (2146) writes:

...lol...ok,ok...last one...i can only describe this as witnessing a total meltdown in slow motion...director's cut...i'm done now...i swear...you the man...

On Tuesday June 15th, 2004, suicideseason (2146) writes:

...*snickers*...i think it is the sense of welcoming the doom that makes this such a captivating piece for me...resigned...looking forward...i love this poem...

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