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I've built my own abandoned home,
On a mount of wishful thinking,
Its busted locks of busted trust,
Leave anguish doors free swinging,

Thus it weighs upon my dreams,
A foundation meant to crumble,
Surrounded by a blackened fence,
And little lifeless brambles,

It overlooks a lake of shame,
And meadows of disgrace,
Their lonely roads lead only here,
Like ribbons interlaced,

Walk inside its single room,
Overwhelm yourself with sorrow,
Blood, sweat, and tears scar all the walls,
And every broken window.





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On Sunday October 1st, 2006, carlosjackal (1614) writes:
An excellent poem with a brilliant climax. "Blood, sweat and tears scar all the walls/And every broken window" Superb.


On Wednesday August 31st, 2005, wannabe_rebel (25) writes:
you're a God of rhyme and rhythm. this is a beautiful poem.


On Monday February 14th, 2005, BoldSolitude (278) writes:
great write, the first and third stanza's were exceptional


On Saturday November 6th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
Nice tribute here, man!


On Saturday July 3rd, 2004, violetflames (13) writes:
yeah, that is sincerily awesome and great. I like your work a lot.


On Tuesday June 15th, 2004, Alanarchy (1615) writes:
Knocked me over. This was great. That third stanza completely floored me. Great write. Don Tim is jesus.


On Monday June 14th, 2004, Rebirth (81) writes:
It's really bleak, but that adds even more to the piece. I get the 'I want to shrivel up and die' kind of feeling while reading this. Great work, very vivid pictures.


On Monday June 14th, 2004, suicideseason (2161) writes:
...from the first line,all i could think was,"god...this sounds like me"...to think that i could inspire something so beautiful...wow,Matt...thank you again...


On Monday June 14th, 2004, suicideseason (2161) writes:
...i just can't convey my feelings for this enough...but i also can't leave you without stressing my respect for your endless talent and feeling...


On Monday June 14th, 2004, suicideseason (2161) writes:
_you're one of the nicest people that i know...i am so honored to have you as a friend...you humble me beyond words...i love you,Matt...thank you.:)tim


On Monday June 14th, 2004, suicideseason (2161) writes:
...and the imagery...it's like we may not share the same room...but we share the view...i love you,Matt...


On Monday June 14th, 2004, suicideseason (2161) writes:
...i could go on and on...the respect that i have for you it knows no bounds...and if you ever need anything,do not hesitate for a second to contact me...


On Monday June 14th, 2004, Jedi_MindFuck (325) writes:
fucking kickass, dude. this was awesome. ///Jedi\\\


On Monday June 14th, 2004, glasshouse (812) writes:
This was MAGNIFICANT! The third stanza is absolutely killer. Your words here have really reached a level I couldnt have imagined inside me. Great job! -Glass



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