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A threaded needle mends a rag,
A rag that's soaked in shame,
The thread is made of misery,
But mends it all the same.

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On Monday July 11th, 2005, wannabe_rebel (25) writes:

i'm completely blown away. short and simple never sounded so great... cuz it's really not simple at all. you are a god of words...

On Saturday December 11th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (862) writes:

If I was ever knocked on my ass by so very few words...this would be it.great write.

On Tuesday June 8th, 2004, Arsonick (6) writes:

This is great! What a great metaphor for how the pain and suffering we face can shape our lives. Right on, man! Everything I read of yours rocks!

On Tuesday June 8th, 2004, Endifference (274) writes:

Straight-up incantation, this one.

On Tuesday June 8th, 2004, suicideseason (2146) writes:

_damn...24 words...fucking atom bomb dropped...you can clean it up...but you can't fix it...my mouth is wide open...awesome,Matt.:)timchrist

On Tuesday June 8th, 2004, capt_funguy (1002) writes:

this was a swift fuckin bull's eye ... it's it's own exclaimation point ... funguy

On Monday June 7th, 2004, K_Love (695) writes:

Deep for just a few words... I liked it and understanded it.. Great words... ~Kirsten~

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