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he speaks to her in whispers
that her heart cannot translate
Forced her bleeding soul
into a world that he creates

Meant to mend her weary heart
at last come to her aid
sooth her in her discontent
No longer so afraid

She held him to her beating heart
in hopes that he'd be still
and told him that the things he hates
arn't things that he can kill

She loved him with her entire soul
...with every bleeding part
he more then filled the aching hole
that once had held her heart







© 2008 Lydia Jade

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On Monday May 5th, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (500) writes:
I always did like the image of loving with a soul as opposed to a heart, gives the emotion almost a feel of divinity, and enforces it as being immortal. This was a good piece, *salutes*


On Monday May 5th, 2008, Ainsof (1831) writes:
Impeccable rhyme! The last stanza really grabbed me... the bleeding part of her and her aching hole that he filled... very moving imagery! I like the metrical variation... the trimeter is a nice contrast to the tetrimeter... but I think there may be a homophone in the last stanza.


On Monday May 5th, 2008, Lydia Jade (790) writes:
Who are you calling a homo!


On Monday May 5th, 2008, Lydia Jade (790) writes:
I kid lol, thnks


On Monday May 5th, 2008, Rain In The Willows (853) writes:
you are gorgeous...*wants to pick your brain and eat it for brilliance...* well, maybe in a less zombie like fashion...meh, well, you know. :-/


On Monday May 5th, 2008, Lydia Jade (790) writes:
Im terrified of zombies...*shivers*


On Monday May 5th, 2008, Rain In The Willows (853) writes:
aww... we'll definately have to find a slightly less malevolent way them...


On Monday May 5th, 2008, Lydia Jade (790) writes:
*throws brain at you* here take it just dont try and eat me *cries and runs away*


On Monday May 5th, 2008, Rain In The Willows (853) writes:
awww, *borrows brain for a few minutes and runs a few nessacery tests, gently replaes it in Lydia's head and offers her ice cream* I won't eat you, I promise...I have a full bag of cheetos right here in my lap...


On Monday May 5th, 2008, Lydia Jade (790) writes:
*giggles and claps her hands* you tickled my brain...ICE CREAM!!!!!


On Monday May 5th, 2008, Aleas (183) writes:
I love flowing pieces like this. I can see and feel the rhythm, and it adds a wonderful aesthetic musical quality to the content of the poem. This was very well done.



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