DarkPoetry -|- Lydia Jade -|- If death is really the end, Then thats when I shall say goodbye.

If death is really the end, Then thats when I shall say goodbye.

If forever wasn’t long enough
if these words don’t seem strong enough
Ill twist the very fabrics of reality
To build you something new
Because in my heart and in my head
I know ill love you
Till I’m dead

With every breath, my heart beat sputters
And from my lips these words I stutter
Out the cause of my affliction
My bleeding hearts
Found a new addiction

You my love
Will keep me sane
Through any sorrow
Hurt or pain

Because in my heart

And in my head

I know ill love you

…’Till I’m dead.

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On Sunday March 2nd, 2008, wilted (282) writes:

Wonderfully adorable and sweet. It's so sing-songy and flows with amazing conviction. You really mean the words you say, it shows. Beautiful poem, as always.

On Sunday March 2nd, 2008, tangeled (579) writes:

'if forever wasn't long enough' what an opener. this poem reminds me of the traditional standard of wedding vows which have always seemed so melancholy to me in that they always say 'til death do us part'. it would be so nice to say we could be together and in love forever but can we really say it in truth? does anyone really know if death is the end? what a perfect way to put words of the utmost complete truth. the only truth we really know. that we will die someday. and to love to that moment should and will be enough. very nice write i shall now have to upgrade because i can't not bookmark this. thank you for yet another beautiful piece of art. ~ta

On Sunday March 2nd, 2008, Alanarchy (1627) writes:

"found a new addiction" struck me as cliche. But that's my addled mind. Anyway, the rest of the write, I enjoyed thoroughly. Cool on it.

On Sunday March 2nd, 2008, Geisha (893) writes:

Heart wrenching.

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